| Reviews for The First Cycle |
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Wawit E.V chapter 5 . 9/13 Y pensar que el monstruo era otro, ahora veo que lo eres tu ¿matar a la hija? al menos los 2 se hubieran muerto, men me dejaste un amargo recuerdo de eso, dime que habrá continuación por favor. |
R.Gabor chapter 5 . 6/21 Well man... I wish I didn't read this chapter... as you said it is shocking... as a writing it is a good job but I wouldn't did this to Aleu. Well my advice is to write another end with an another ending... It can be anything but KILL HIS OWN DAUGHTER... And it isn't gonna be real too... She is his favorite child so... Just make an another end for it. Not an new another chapter but a different ending please! |
Wolfdick chapter 1 . 5/28 Dog dick and wolf dick sexy as fuck in balto wolfdick inside aleu tight wet cookie |
Misteri nella Storia chapter 5 . 5/19 ATTENTION FINAL SPOILER HISTORY ! I was shocked by the ending of the story, in my opinion Balto cannot live long with the media remorse killed his daughter, to have lied to Jenna but above all to her, to have told him that everything is settled by running away together and then ... my thoughts in the end Balto will choose to do the same end as Aleu, throwing himself off a cliff, consumed by remorse ... Part of me wants the whole thing to be just a bad wolf dog nightmare ... ATTENZIONE SPOILER FINALE STORIA! Sono rimasto scioccato dal finale della storia, secondo me Balto non può vivere a lungo con il rimorso di aver ucciso sua figlia, di avere mentito a Jenna ma soprattutto a lei, di avergli detto che tutto si sarebbe sistemato fuggendo insieme e poi... nei miei pensieri alla fine Balto sceglierà di fare la stessa fine di Aleu, gettandosi da una scogliera, consumato dal rimorso... Una parte di me vuole che tutta la vicenda sia solo un brutto incubo del cane lupo... |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/11 Please do more of knotty alphas |
Arika Koski chapter 5 . 5/9 That was weird and I don't ship Balto X Aleu and incest is disgusting. Why would kill Aleu? She's my favorite and she don't need to die. I prefer Balto X Jenna mating and Aleu mating either with Niju of Taku that brown wolf from Balto 2. I'm sorry if I sound to rash but this Balto X Aleu is not my favorite. |
Whitewolf1224 chapter 5 . 5/3 Wow what a great read!, even though you revealed the ending awhile back it was nice to read a full chapter to get the extra details. Originally When i first read this story i thought jenna was either gonna find out or balto tells Aleu to run away, what ended up happening was much more darker. I blame jenna though cause that drug she gave balto to stop him from getting a errection wore off too fast, which put balto between a rock and hard place, aleu tempting him was just too much for him to handle. I think Jenna could've tried harder to find a way for Aleu to stay at her house til the cycle passes by, or at least defy her owners for once so she could stay on balto's boat, being there to pleasure Balto and to make sure nothing happened. I hope you'll continue to stick around and write on here, i keep up the good work! |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/3 Well that was dark |
Lover of A Good Story chapter 5 . 5/3 Considering what a bitch Aleu was being, this is the best ending for her. Why dump her body right away though? I'm sure he could have gotten a few more rounds out of it. |
KatyTXdogFUCKER chapter 5 . 5/3 How can you ruin the image of 2 sexy ass wolfdogs making sweet canine love with that ending! so cruel. I was imagining balto's huge wolf knot making a ravaging of aleu's tight twat and then you had to go and drop that bomb. Good writing as always, i hope you still continue to stick around. my old username was outed but hopefully this guest username rings a bell! |
Kodiwolf321 chapter 5 . 5/3 He killed her?! No way?! *jaw drop* that was a good ending I’m glad you finished this! |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/3 Please add another chapter |
Wawit E.V chapter 4 . 4/13/2019 Con k te gusta exitar a la gente ehhhh no hay otra capitulo? :v |
Lover of A Good Story chapter 4 . 9/10/2018 I don't have any sympathy for Aleu. She reduced her father into fucking her. She begged and begged him til he gave in. And just because he knotted her HE's the bad guy? As for Balto, instead of acting the way he did, he should have just looked her in the eye and said "I just gave you what you begged for bitch." |
PIWDIEPIE chapter 4 . 8/12/2018 THE FUCK WEARS THE NEXT WWWWWWWEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRRREEEEE! |