Please continue your story

Good, the low lifes who assaulted Caroline & kidnapped Ray have been caught & are on their way to jail. I just hope that Butler & Parker's friends don't try & break them out of jail.

I'm glad Ray is safely home with his family. I hope his father & the other 2 didn't hurt him too badly. I hope Jerry recovers from his injuries also.

Please update

Oh happy to have things a little back to normal

I love how everyone steps up to help when needed. They have some wonderful employees
So happy to have a new chapter

Finally these low downs are caught. Adam was quite fiesty, they were lucky Hoss wasnt there. You did a fantastic job with action drama and emotion of this scene.

The details in this were so well described, I could see it happening. I thought it was fitting that one of the kidnappers was kidnapped doing "his business" . He is a piece of crap. They all are. Now they get to spend time in jail glaring at each other.

I’ve very much enjoyed the story. I hope it’s going to carry on. Please. x thank you for your hard work. x

They’re still mouthing off aren’t they old Parker and Butler despite now being caught banged to rights and getting a right hander from Adam (who hits like a girl apparently) that nearly knocked his jaw out, couldn’t have happened to a nicer guy. Finally it looks like this is finally over for Ray and he can just get in with being Hoss and Caroline’s son without any chance of that changing. But poor William despite being the hero of the day catching Deakins is now likely to catch it with Ben too

Poor Jerry he was so brave and loyal and got hurt gravely because of what old Deakins did in taking his son who is no longer his, and whom he doesn’t deserve either, so glad he’s been caught and will now pay for what he has done to Ray. And it warmed my heart to hear if his brothers trying to help, these boys are now firm family and true brothers in every sense of the word aren’t they

I am so enjoying this story. I like the way you write and characters and do glad the boys are all safe.

Finally they've been captured! Sheriff is right: they're very lucky the Cartwrights didn't just shoot them right there. Getting a fair trial is more than they will ever deserve. And...hopefully Jerry survives to enjoy some of that fancy brandy!

loving it thank you

What does one say. Clever tactics always work. I say well done to Sheriff Coffee. He is a good organiser and his plan worked. All bad men safely on their way to jail. We now have to wait to hear the verdict. Good chapter. Thanks.