the banker from little house on the prairie?

I love the style of this story, and the fun facts at the end of the chapters were great. A real break from your other stories, but done so very well.

Okay the ending made me cry like a baby...its so sweet and tender...

Oh my god, this ending literally made me cry. This has to one of your best stories.

There's a lake of tears in my room! This is so beautifully written and I love the plot! Amazing job!

Supernatural Fanfiction Monthly Awards Review:
The Good - your research paid off, the period feel was consistent throughout, as was the narrative style, which worked really well. I loved the tongue-in-cheek little details (like Sam's special breeze and his random shirt-ripping) and the whole tied-to-a-train-track scene that made me realise you were actually writing a silent movie.
The Bad - punctuation (commas matter!), dodgy spelling (your instead of you're all the time, amongst other things) and lots of typos. They were distracting and spoiled the flow. I'd really recommend a beta reader to help catch those.
The Ugly? Well you drew a great cartoon villain, and Dick and John were very ugly! Nothing wrong with that.

Supernatural Fanfiction Monthly Awards Review: This was crack-tastic and very interesting to read. I was definitely not prepared for all of the cute and crazy scenes within. I really liked the dynamic between your characters and the playfulness was adorable (and had me laughing!)

I think your area for improvement lies in getting a beta reader or someone to edit some of these chapters. The spelling/grammatical errors often got in the way of some of your really funny scenes/lines. With a few quick edits this will make things much better. Other than that, I think this story was very unique and exciting. I felt attached to all of the characters and wanted to yell at Dick and John the entire time. Your historical add-ons were terribly interesting and I was googling them on the side as I read.

I'm glad you put all this work into this story, because it's clear Cherry Sam and Sweet Rose Dean were very appreciated:)

i loved your story...it should be a movie it was that good ...it was a sad ending but i loved it anyway :)

This story was a very interesting read for me. I can honestly say I have never read anything like it. This story was nonsensical to the extreme, it really didn't make any sense, but it was comedic enough to keep me reading. Sam and Dean, as well as other familiar faces, had nothing to do with the original characters except for the names and descriptions, so there wasn't anything to recognize in these completely made up personalities. I feel you could have used a Beta Reader, as there were many places that were missing words, had misspelled words, or some words were used incorrectly. I found these mistakes interrupting the flow of the story sometimes. Some places in the story seemed to be rushed, while other places seemed to jump around.

What kept me reading was the historical facts at the end of each chapter, as well as the silly, but lovable OC's, that actually had me laughing out loud on occasion. Even the characters from the show were quite funny at times, and I still find it hilarious that Sam ripped shirts and had a wind blow through his hair for no reason at all! This was a crazy universe to be sure! :)

Awww, Sam is a sweet sixteen year old who has dreams of finding the love of his life. I'm glad that Dean isn't a jaded twenty year old, that just wants to take advantage of Sam.

I loved this fic! Great job!

So far this is the most crack-tastic fic I have ever read and I can't stop! Also I really like the little facts at the end of the chapters. Nice touch.

What a beautiful ending. I just found this story and have been reading it for the past few hours. Great job. I loved it.

Here comes baby!

The baby is coming!