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Jamie-lea McDonald chapter 12 . 8/11 Please please update please please ️️️ |
Babysis64 chapter 12 . 7/2 wow this was a good chapter update, thank you for sharing with us. I'm glad that they caught Victoria. I'm shocked that Alice didn't see that she was after Bella. I'm happy for Sam and Bella and Charlie, becoming a grandfather for twins. I wonder if they will get married as well. Have a good rest of the week. |
bella.beau.14 chapter 12 . 6/30 love it |
vampgirliegirl chapter 12 . 6/30 Keep going please |
blackangel150 chapter 12 . 6/30 Love the chapter |
kouga's older woman chapter 12 . 6/30 Wow! Bye Victoria! |
AliceCullen0629 chapter 11 . 2/8 REALLY YOU STOP THERE! Update soon! The last update was Feb. 2017 it is now Feb. 2020! |
Roxhall1 chapter 11 . 1/24 more please |
rburt1973 chapter 11 . 6/14/2019 Please please continue with this story I love it. Don't leave us hanging! Just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed your storytelling! |
bella.beau.14 chapter 11 . 4/10/2019 More please |
Debbie Hicks chapter 11 . 8/27/2018 12. Chapter 12. Bella's pov CLAAIRE YOUNG Baitten her harder then the three with eeeight thyousands Volturi you broke bothy lawe what then you turn ed her into Get rid of her Wwith her Screaming Felix kill theeem EEEEEEEEExecution of us with eeeight thousands then Venomized tore from here blood/tore clothes MURDERED! RRipped from here ASssaulted as aall of the three fou corpse wsith their you die with them theen ATOMIZED! hhhheads were fred cursed to roam without m emories wsith as aall brought here then ten too late Cullens with three tried to sasve our lives no m ore death ten tore wsith transported Shiftpire kids eight then wsith theirs eexecuted then were Punished from here then Forbidden then too late tore from here Broken freely bring them don 't see them Ripped loose then too late Brought here as all of them then suddenly never seenort returned Alice wsho did to her wsith as all Volturi then myself was all-Venomous from Alien Rattlesn akesa gotten a very pain fully pounding headasche advanced but focused my power Menatal shield then First Hun t to as all of mazollions of land animals as aall drain ed then suddenly to our own ATOMIZED With more Converted theeen theen IMPALED Tore freely cursed to roam as a Vampire slaying sailor soldier still a Newborn imprint still powerful then heads ripped brought as all was Bitter immortality officially fully time more Completely truesdt reasll ripped now Brought here was not aging from here but linked telepathithcally shattered then had B rought a s all most as all we discovered she's immortal cursed by Artemis/gods/goddessees withyout heads as well had turned her as Vampire slaying sailor guardiasn con verrted rid from here b ring them as asll wsith as all remains nowe ripped from here as all of them suddenly were asch five nuked frreeely stolen/voice/blood bitten freeel exploded of bad blood was deadliest was toxic waste their young/youth reported as all of us/mazillions were Immortal frozen in body and katra with mind sliced from here brought here but no longer motral as well had n west blood became Vegetarian but lost the need to die/wwere Ancient but Really very old were in fact with Bright Yellow mixed wsith black were colored eyes darker golden brown officially no longer the prey was a lethal pretator stalking Victoria Mes with m e You'r Terminated set Harry's gun was in fact a Slayer a Vampire Slayer was a Assassin trained birth was taught to slay Vampires Surrender by orders of the United Federation of Planets we Sentence you to execution then Now! Pack her screams was heard Shot Victoria with a bullet so toxic her screams was heard news of her murder from myself was a true Vampire slaying Assassin sailor soldier born to Destroy them blown freely ripped from here good what she's slays Vampires officially but nuked free brought them but cursed to roman Earth for eternity banished but myself never died or went old so as all young lady you are different your slayer bond is fiercer then now unable to be elderly anymore were aboard flew never returned but who met nuked were more with young each both nuked freely but merged as a vessel were with as all all of them with as all things now stranded were as all of them merged then as all of five used burned with us/as all blown brought here good then killed then ashes from here three brought here to justice then killed now wiped out now humans were too old had reincarnates died here after birth deported kids followed here now Humanity is extinct but lost from here Vampires ruled Earth. |
Guest chapter 10 . 3/17/2018 I loved the part were sam starts dancing with bella. I actuall listened to Elvis's song while i read it and just bawld my eyes out because of the image i pictured of them both sweetly swaying to the music, just basking in the happyness of finding out they are having twins. I could just picture how organic and beautiful they both looked. It was beautiful. |
Cebco chapter 11 . 8/21/2017 Are you going to finishthis |
Babysis64 chapter 10 . 5/10/2017 oh no I wonder who's blood that is on Bella's truck and if they will find out. I hope that her dad and herself and the pack and the people who Bella love are going to stay safe. |
Babysis64 chapter 9 . 5/10/2017 wow now they are going to have one of each, and yes I wonder if the brother is going to be very protective of the sister when they are born and a little older. |