Funny story you have ! beautiful too!

This was actually pretty funny, more Nazu.

NATSU GET ERZA CAKE! GRAY STRIP!

Way to go Maxy! NaZa FTW! Of course, Erza would want to keep her figure by eating cake, pfftt..

Oh God, not Boku no Pico… why would he even consider that?

But anyway, this was a combination of adorable and hilarious! I'm so glad more people are recognizing NatZa, and I don't quite mind GrUvia, so yay!

That was the single funniest thing I have ever found on here. I sincerely thank you for giving me an amazingly long laugh since its been a while since I laughed hard enough to cry. Keep up the excellent work.

Lol I really enjoyed this. My favorite part was when Natsu considered getting Erza a treadmill. I really wasn't expecting that. XD

great story

My reaction when Natsu got a Manga "YES!"
When I found out it was BnP "NOOOO! AHHHH NOOOO!" You got that right, I've seen the horrors... Of that show... Yaoi is one thing but they're like 10! TEN! -vomits-

Anyways, nice story. Had me laughing XD

- Knight

Funny story :p liked it though!

-ValinNight

I loved it I thought it was really funny and 50 reviews to get a sequel what about your fans who read it and wanted more 50 is a little much don't you think.