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lazyncrazy chapter 13 . 7/17 I'd say wedding in general in this side of the world is way too different. |
lazyncrazy chapter 4 . 7/17 Hey... I saw a recommendation for this story and decided to head in. We are perpetually neighbors country wise. Let's see where this goes, something I can relate with some I can't for now. |
vampirelady13 chapter 1 . 1/18 I hate how she thinks brown eyes are plain. My kids all have brown eyes and there beautiful. I also get sick of Bella putting her dad down. I always thought of Rene as plain and not a good mother either. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4 okay this must be based off greys anatomy haha |
Guest chapter 54 . 12/4/2019 Enjoy reading this story. Thank you f or sharing your talent to us your reader. |
Lou chapter 8 . 10/29/2019 Hi, admittedly, my comment is a bit late - I just wanted to take the time to tell you that every time I read the word Nazi used inappropriately, I flinched, had images from history class come up before my inner eyes, and - needless to say - got completely distracted from the story. Maybe that is because I am German, but nonetheless one should never ever downplay the type of heinous criminals that Nazis are. Other than that, nice story! :) I enjoyed reading it! |
redhot gunterman chapter 10 . 9/19/2019 flashbacks guess they knew each other when they were young |
vampirelady13 chapter 11 . 9/13/2019 That is dumb to wait to meet him,at the alter because if it was me never this would never be me I would not get married just to make my parents happy. That is stupid if I was this stupid when I saw him at the alter I would flip him off and leave the church. |
vampirelady13 chapter 10 . 9/13/2019 I think Bella needs to grow up and tell her parents to shove it. |
vampirelady13 chapter 9 . 9/13/2019 I feel bad for Bella and if it was me on the wedding day I would run for the hills and tell my parents to fuck off. |
vampirelady13 chapter 8 . 9/13/2019 Wow spineless Bella still in the house. I think it is stupid that she lets all of them was talk all over her. I wish Bell's inner Bitch would come out and stay out. Edward sounds like an ass. |
vampirelady13 chapter 7 . 9/13/2019 I like Rose more than Alice in this story which is weird becaus not like her in the books. |
vampirelady13 chapter 6 . 9/13/2019 So Alice warns Bella not to hurt Edward. Who is going to warn Edward not to hurt Bella don't think it will be her parents they seem happy to marry her off. |
vampirelady13 chapter 5 . 9/13/2019 I hope you are not going to have Alice play Bella Barbie all the time that shit gets old in story's. I guess Bella's parents don't care If she is happy. Rene is stupid. Rene and Charlie to me it seem s they don't care as much about Bella s feelings as much as there own. What if ends badly and Bella gets hurt what will they think of there idea then. Bella I hope get s a back bone soon. |
vampirelady13 chapter 3 . 9/13/2019 Wow her parents don't care about her finding love. They were not very good parents if she feels like as he is worthless. Now she even feels worse are her parents blind or just don't care if she is loved or not. |