Reviews for Lying Here With You
Queen of Ice and Hallows chapter 22 . 5/11
Beautifully written - I do hope the bug catches you again and you finish your story. Fingers crossed and story followed, just in case :)
Cyrianu chapter 22 . 2/12
I love this story so much.

I first read it a few years ago, but had also forgotten much of it between then and now. Their interactions are so well written, and they feel very in-character. It's also one of the few canon-divergent fics which isn't filled with tremendous amounts of angst which is really nice to see for a change.

Thank you.
Cyrianu chapter 21 . 2/12
This was such an amazing chapter, them just connecting with each other more. A wise move to see if somebody can help Anna after what happened with Elsa's powers. Also, this is giving me weird Gale/Iduna vibes after F2.

I did like Elsa catching Anna's subtle hint about clearing the room so they could have a moment together. The only down-point was them acknowledging their need to hide their relationship, but it's understandable and better than something happening to them if they don't.
Cyrianu chapter 20 . 2/12
Aye, much as I'd figured... So selfless, the pair of them, especially so when it comes to each other. Good thing Olaf and Kristoff were able to convince her to go to Elsa.

Kristoff taking some time away makes sense, and it's good to see him taking things relatively in stride.

Them coming together was really cute, albeit Anna's remembering of the daydream falls somewhere between cute and something altogether different... ;)
Cyrianu chapter 19 . 2/12
Well, that was a bit of a roller-coaster of a chapter.

I love how caring and supportive they are for, and of, each other.

The kiss, so beautiful... but then Anna's gone. Does she now blame herself for going too fast? Probably... :( These two have such large hearts, seemingly even more so when it comes to each other's feelings... except when they forget that leaving will hurt the other more than the hurt of the past.

Kristoff's steadfastness here is admirable in the face of the sight he just bore witness to.
Cyrianu chapter 18 . 2/12
Dear $Deity, YES! So beautiful - and Elsa's protectiveness of Anna flaring up like a caged animal at Gerda having left Anna alone when she was in that troubled state...
Cyrianu chapter 17 . 2/12
Oh. My. GOD!

So, Anna's finally clued in _completely_, and I think Elsa's definitely getting there with the way she responded to the kiss and the way she said "For both of us".
Cyrianu chapter 16 . 2/12
Olaf embodying Elsa's jealousy to attack Kristoff is way too funny for words. Thank goodness he's only got a small wooden sword.

The recollection regarding the story and how they used to re-create the scenes was very cute. And it looks like Elsa _might_ be starting to clue in a bit.
Cyrianu chapter 15 . 2/12
Very interesting. Also, I cannot state enough times how much I love the way Elsa and Anna interact when they step out from the moment and just be themselves around each other... cuddling, drawing circles, the gentle and tender way they talk. They're both so protective in their own ways, too.
Cyrianu chapter 14 . 2/12
Anna's definitely improving, that's good - certainly probably helps that she can now move a bit more freely with the change in padding. Elsa's daydream - very nice!

Huh, curious re: the weather anomalies... Definitely interested to see where that leads.
Cyrianu chapter 13 . 2/12
Poor Elsa, still so hard on herself...Thank goodness for Anna's reassurances.

"We made a baby together" and "He really is ours"... a combination of perfect and way too funny all at once.
Cyrianu chapter 12 . 2/12
Very cute chapter. I laughed so hard at "Uh, Anna your sword is digging into me." Then Anna ridding herself of the offending item and resuming her position... love it.
Cyrianu chapter 11 . 2/12
lol... I was just reading something earlier this week that referenced Olaf attacking Kristoff with a wooden sword whenever he and Anna kissed. How fortuitous to be reading this now.
Cyrianu chapter 10 . 2/11
$Deity! Between that conversation, and Anna's fingers trailing down Elsa's thigh... wow.
Cyrianu chapter 9 . 2/11
Wow... This was amazing. Ah, but happiness is but the icing on the cake of your emotions there Anna, as you shall find out. :)
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