This story is really endearing and adorable. I liked it very much and you've made a great job with the characters. Congrats!

so...well-written and sad and surprising and well... amazing!

Wow! You got me good with your intro! A little long but none the less an interesting start. It really got me thinking. Haha Jade will always be Jade but its nice to see his good soft side. Almost cried there with Anise dying and colonel was just holding her. Most people have trouble writing Jade but I believe you got this side of him really well. Thank you for writing!