I loved this story! Thank you for sharing!

I liked your story a lot . Thanks for your time

Alright, what the heck, Edward? He seriously made unwanted advances onto Bella and then bit her when she defended herself. There is no hope for him.

Bella wouldn't have called Charlie if Edward had just let her do so before her change! Urgh! I hate all the Cullens

I've begun to develop the slightest modicum of sympathy for Bella, but honestly. He still hasn't apologized for purposefully hurting her when he pressed on her broken ribs. And did he ever even apologize for breaking her ribs in the first place? Being so cruel towards her, in words and actions? I still don't understand why he didn't let her say goodbye to Charlie. The family is terrible for taking his side and not stopping him from being cruel and hurting her physically. None of them seem to understand the depth of the wrongs done to Bella. They are blinded by their love for Edward. And they are so condescending when they talk about how Bella's emotions are out of control because she's a newborn. It's dismissive. Bella has all the reason and right in the world to be angry and sad! This isn't a criticism of your wtiting, by the way. I love the story. I just wanted to rant about how terrible the Cullens are. Edward has so much atoning to do, it isn't funny.

Excellent story. I've disliked Edward throughout both stories because I knew he would win in the end, yes, he did get both desires! Please write an alternative ending where Bella does actually leave. Not a Jacob insight...bliss. I am actually Team Edward but this Edward...aaagghhhh he really got my goat. :-)

I am not so sure Edward is not the bad guy. I am not sure what he is.

I don't understand why bella would feel like that about being kicked out...at least not at this point.
The world is her mother fucking oyster! She could go anywhere! she could find theo...LOL

I'm kinda thinking theo was right, Edwards just a kid...bella needs a man...ive decided that just right now LOL now make theo taller and I'm in!

this andthe first were amazing

Just read this and before it, Here in the Garden of Sin. Absolutely loved both! Looking forward to reading more from you already. Thanks for writing and posting.

Great story, except the edward bella sex scene felt abrupt, even given their circumstances.

Awesome stories. Thank you for writing:-)

This was different. I enjoyed reading it.

NOTES TO SELF: This story is ultimately about Bella being changed outside of her will. They get into it. then this other vamp shows up. Theodoras, and has all these other vamp powers and will eventually be responsible for the death of the fam if they don't play thier cards right to get out of it.