Reviews for βιţţƹяSωƹƹţ ϻმყhƹϻ |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That casual homophobia is not cute girl. Your story was fun but between the f word being thrown like that and the "girls turning lesbian" in a previous chapter I just don't feel like reading anymore. Hope you can educate yourself on these matters and see how harmful this is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to read more soon. D |
![]() ![]() ![]() hideous fic? what the hell r u talkin about? this is a great fic to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this is a story, but I found this chapter offensive. Like I get the guy is from Mexico, it doesn’t have to be mentioned thousands of times, specially how everything was described. Sorry for the rant, but it just made me cringe. This is my opinion of course. Your thoughts, your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thoroughly enjoying this story and your writing style. I hope you are able to finish this. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please tell me Gwen never says yes to Paul and doesn't fall for his disgusting douchebag ass. I know this is a story but I need to see men who think they're God's gift to the world to not be happy. He's literally the definition of fuckboi. Please let him rot in hell |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh continue please, please, please! |
![]() ![]() Oh boy, paul is in for it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I was update to date with this story before you decided to change it and I was a bit disappointed that you were starting again but I must say you're writing has improved a lot and I actually enjoy this version better than the old one (although both are great). I'll be looking forward to your future updates |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm more confused by this story than anything else. For one thing, the comments section is filled with comments on chapters like 11 or 29, but the latest chapter in this story is 4. Did you start over or something? Second, what gives with Paul's name? The first chapter gives his canon name of Paul Lahote, but in the following chapters, you refer to him as Paul Meraz for some reason. I would suggest double-checking your chapters, and stick to one or the other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so happy you're rewriting this! I'm excited to experience it all over again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what?! |
![]() ![]() omg l though she was a boy anyway she is not a boy but paul dam it is just pizza |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the story so far and I hope you add more soon |