This story is so beautiful! :) :D
I have to be honest at first I was like "whatttt cemetery how will that work?" and I wasn't as into it but soon enough your story just pulled me right in!
Oh lord, did your story slap me in the face!
My gosh, that was sooooo romantic! It was so good that I decided to play some romantic music(Bu bu jing xi soundtrack) in the background while I read your story. lol xD

Aww the part were Ryou walks down the cemetery and looks at each card was so awesome xP
And just everything is great! Yami Bakura really impressed me. lol Hes so romantic. I'm not surprised that ryou was blown away hahaha I sure was!

I loved it.

kawaii

I can say I tried reading this and I could not get through with it. Because of the way that Ryou constantly stutters. It was distracting, not to mention quite unnecessary. Ryou doesn't stutter constantly in the manga nor the anime, at least if he does, very rarely. My suggestion would be to not do that. From one writer to another. It took me out of the story and broke the magic of reading something. It's very distracting. And I don't mean to sound rude, it is just an honest criticism.

Alright your story has made my slightly fall in love with Yami no Bakura
Great Ra of a wonderful job

This was so great!
The idea was super unique and I've never seen it used before :3 and I love how Ryou kept being his little shy self!
Definently one of my favorites from you.
Hope you have a great Valentine's Day! 3
-Silver