I really enjoyed your Story, it is very well written. I love Valentine and Jocelyne, i think they are the most interesting couple of the mortal instruments, although their end was not very nice :(

awww, I think this story is excellent. Please continue!

Wow. Amazingly in character, super well written, I was so pissed at Gillian! Awesome descriptions, I could get a clear image of everything happening in this fanfic! Great Job!