I’m sorry but one thing that I find hard to believe is that Purity has managed to pop out not one, but THREE BABIES (1 in the womb). I’m not sure how old they/Purity are but what really annoys me is that Purity willingly brought 3 kids into a literal warzone of a world. Your cousin destroys everything and your idea is to get handsy and pop out children? It just doesn’t add up.

Okay I think I've read enough to be able to review right now. First off I like the semi- Lilo and Stitch reference about family meaning nobody gets left behindBut now I must admit Im not actually liking all of what I've read so far. There is more dialogue than story and not much had been explained. I've been able to keep a general understanding of things but there should still be some more story to this. Something to describe, or explain, or yknow something. Also, you have an incredible amount of original characters. That's... I won't say anything because even though they aren't mentioned in the summary (as I'd have preferred) they are still noticeable from the beginning so I can't really complain. But still, they start rattling off names and there's about 30 (hyperbole I know) random names being called out and in my head I'm just like "Who the heck..." Moving on, Prue is obviously alive in this au. I would've rather had known that from the summary as well. Next, for Purity to have 4 daughters... I assume she's older than Chris? He's supposed to be conceived in 2004 according to canon (so the year she goes back to). But she's isn't born in that timeline already so I guess she's younger than him? He's 22 so her having 4 kids in a world like the one Chris describes and being younger than chris is crazy unbelievable. Lastly, piper Paige and phoebe are there questioning Chris but she's prues daughter so I wonder where Prue came from. I mean is she revived in the future and allowed to have children? Did she must never die, in which cade where is she while all this is going on? I'm honestly not trying to bad talk your story or day anything offensive or rude. I'm just saying that those are the kind of questions I got while reading these first couple of chapters and personally that's too much for me to want to continue reading.

God I hope there's more this is a good story need more soon thank you

please please update soon

good work, I'm glad Chris finally told them.

more please love it

This is a good chapter!

Aaahhhh update! Great chapter!

Good chapter!

Great job! Keep going!

Please update soon

Btw, I forgot to write this in my review. I hope you are feeling better and that you surround yourself around positive people that will help you battle your depression. I will keep you in my prayers and I hope that you continue to do well.

This chapter was well written. I love it! I really hope that Piper, Phoebe, and Paige find out soon so they can eat their words. I love that you're already writing Leo as trying to mend his relationship with Chris. Keep writing, please :)

thank you :)

cute compliments this story

appearance the next chapters in the history

yes ok :)

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You're health and well being matter most! Please take care of yourself. That being said thank you for the update.