| Reviews for Secunda |
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Guest chapter 4 . 10/8/2016 Awesome story. Please update. |
Guest chapter 4 . 6/4/2016 Please update. I love this story |
properlycolorful chapter 4 . 3/16/2016 I really like this story! It's really original and very intricate and elaborate. I like how you throw in some light CatoKatniss fluff occasionally, but it's never too much to be plausible. You develop them nicely; I like that they're being developed as friends, and equal partners, first, because that's important. Moreover, I really like Katniss's character here. She's strong, independent, but kind and sympathetic and compassionate. She's incredibly well-rounded, dimensional, and I hope that never changes- even though I know it will since people have different aspects and flaws. And, surprisingly, Cato is super tame here, but I love it. I love that you're exploring his character and fleshing him out realistically, because I feel like as a young adult it should be confusing enough to grow up and live in a totally different environment. I hope you keep investing time in him, but also in Katniss. I think it's important we find out about her dreams, especially since she she knows so much. Anyway, continue, please! I really, really like this story. You're doing s brilliant job. |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/3/2016 Update please |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/23/2016 This is amazing! I'm really loving this. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
GoldenRat chapter 4 . 1/11/2016 Very interested to learn more of Katniss' backstory and why she and Cato are in Skyrim. |
loremaster121 chapter 4 . 1/6/2016 Fantastic new chapter! The story is so well written and is progressing at a fantastic pace. Cannot for more. Please update soon. |
MetallicMedallion chapter 4 . 1/6/2016 It worked! I guess my (and everyone else's) pleas for you to update finally got to you and here we are with Chapter 4! Again this is a really good chapter, and I really like the way that you've included a lot of aspects of Skyrim with it (I know a lot about it now that I've played the game lol) instead of just using it as a random place that they're in. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This story is great, even if it's only on its fourth chaper. -MM |
MetallicMedallion chapter 3 . 1/4/2016 Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase UPDATE! please ;_; this story is so good and I want to see the development between Cato and Katniss' relationship, and what happens in the end, so PLEASE, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, UPDATE! UPDATE! |
MetallicMedallion chapter 1 . 11/15/2015 I read this story in about May this year, and I clicked off it because I didn't know anything about Skyrim. Basically, that was a dumb move. I found the story again a few days ago and I've been addicted to reading it over and over again! Please update ASAP! Loads of people love this story (even if they haven't reviewed)! -MM |
Jacki chapter 3 . 9/11/2015 Hello! I found your story only today and I just love it! Catoniss is my OTP, and your fanfiction is really perfect! I loved every single word! I can't wait for the next chapters! Please, update soon! And sorry if you found any mistakes in this review, but I'm an half Italian and an half from Belarus, so...! Good afternoon! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/23/2015 You are very talented. I would love to read more. I have a feeling this is going to be a great story. |
xalitude chapter 2 . 8/3/2015 really like it so far. |
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 hate to wtite reviews but tell you what - i'm very intrigued by this fic. i think it has the potential to become something both deep and enthralling plotwise. |
arahsiharu chapter 3 . 8/3/2015 Absolutely love it even though I don't know a first thing about this Skyrim! Cato is very interesting, this subconscious longing for freedom of his is very... i don't even know actually. but i feel for him I guess. And Katniss is just perfect, so strong. In fanfiction she's often made into some pathetic weakling in desperate need of a strong [read abusive] man. Your Katniss is certainly a delight. And the plot is highly intriguing, too. I have no idea at all what you plan with all this. Personally I hope that after some time together in Skyrim they both will find themselves back in Panem and reaped for the Hunger Games of course (and then form in an alliance maybe?). or whatever really. I almost cried from happiness when I got back from a vacation with no internet and among other things saw a notification about this story. For some reason it really excites me so... could you maybe post a new chapter sooner than in several months? I know it's not very popular, especially comparing to your HP x Death Note crossover, but still it's a very good and talented work. P.S. sorry for any mistakes I may have made, I'm not a native speaker, and have a nice day! |