Thank you.

Me encantó esta historia! Tanto así que la leí en un día, tal vez haciendo trampa en mi trabajo. Sinceramente, es perfecto. Coincide con todo. La verdad me gustó que hubiese terminado como lo hizo la historia original, aunque no puedo evitar anhelar un final feliz, o al menos un mini Ligth por ahí...

Han transcurrido 3 años, y aún así espero tu promesa de continuar, aunque sea un capítulo alterno... el que sea...

Eres un escritor fantástico, disfruté cada letra.

Interesting story. Some things I like, some I did not.

Hands down best part is the philosophy, though. Death Note gives us few real-world references to accurately gauge Light's view-points, but you did very well capturing what I would consider the core of his belief systems and he argued those points exactly how I would imagine.

The OC works well enough. It is clear there are some arcs that worked better than others for her, though. Like the stuff with school and college is fine, but the Totsuba and Near arcs do not. Ending also some weak for her.

All and all, though, this was a fun read. Well done!

Words just can't stress how much I've enjoyed this fic. I absolutely loved every second of it and finished reading it in a few hours. I've been searching for a good Light fic for a while now and I think I got more than I had originally bargained for: both the storyline and writing style are flawless, the use of philosophy is so fitting and intriguing, the finale mesmerizing. I wouldn't change a single thing, as the pieces fit so well together. I was hoping for an ending like the one you wrote since I think it was a fundamental step for the original character's development: the last chapter is pure art and it completes the process of making the oc a tridimentional character I can identify with. That's one of the many reasons why this story is so enjoyable, all of the characters seem so real! I've also loved the relationship dynamics between Light/Kira and the oc, they work so well together and I'm glad the end goal of the fic wasn't purely romanticism. I hope I was able to convey just how much your story has enraptured me. I look forward to reading more of your works, congrats

So good! I read this a few years ago I think and loved it and I just finished it again and like it even more. I remember this story made me start getting interested in philosophy. Thank you, you really inspired me

Intetesting.

Wow, just wow.
This is actually one of the smarter works that I've read. Nice going, realistic character. You must've some deep interest in philosophy, the ones you've written didn't go in circles like most tend to. It's coherent, and simplified enough for us commonfolk to read. The character growth, and the change in believe, just, wow.

This was just incredible. I don't have the words.

Oustanding.

Exsistentionalism and Phenomenology to Analytic Philosophy, damn I think I wet myself with this chapter lol, I think this is by far my favorite ever even though I haven't finished. Truly, I enjoy that you've decided to include Philosophy in this fiction. I'm even more so hyped to read it.

Fantastic! I was so hooked!

Wow, I really, really liked this story. I’ve read quite a lot of Death Note fanfiction, and I think this might be my favorite! The writing was good, the characterization was good, and it even made me tear up. Great job, and thanks for sharing this with us! I’d love to read more of your work—my next stop is your author profile to see what else you’ve written. :)

Amazing story! I usually don't like major original characters, but yours is really well done and fits perfectly with canon. The pacing, the prose, the structure of this story are all brilliantly done. But my favorite part is the character development; it's gradual yet so dramatic. Thanks for posting this!

This was one of the most interesting and fascinating fan fictions I have ever had the pleasure of reading. It’s amazing and interesting, your plot and reasoning is simply delightful.
I was hesitant to read this FanFiction because you said it had religious blasphemy but I didn’t see that at all. I am religious and this was perfectly fine for me. The questioning of moral, social and biological concepts was interesting and I couldn’t stop reading. I absolutely adored it and it’s now on my favorites. Nice work and please continue to publish stories similar to this. They are amazing.

I've read lots of fanfiction. Hunredrs and hundreds of stories before I got tired of it. Fanfiction is rarely good even when you search with a purpose and have enough of tropes understanding to see a bad story from the first words of summary alone.
Which is why I'm so happy today. This is an incredible story! So strong, so... complete! And very beautifully done.
Great job!
And thanks for making my day)