I know what you felt bud, my grandpa died and I couldn't write for some time :(
still i told myself: no pain, no gain

Roberto (Bruno Mars) should marry his sister, just like Bruno Mars could've done in the earlier 2010s.

FINISH THE FANFIC! YOU CANT END WITH AN ENDING THAT IS SAD AND SUSPENSIVE! (Is that even a word?)

PFFT IT'S SO OBVIOS WHAT VAL WANTED! Cmon seriously, Val thought about having kids earlier the other chapter sooo... I will finish the sentence... "She wants to mate with you." Blu said.

Thank you soo much for this story! i have loved reading it over and over again and i am sooo glad that you persisted to complete it after all that you have been through. Thank You!

I think their relationship is starting too fast. I mean it is like Romeo & Juliet! It's only a matter of time before they kill themselves.

Well... that escalated quickly.

Super Sory. thanks The email i have waited so Long...

:D

Happy on The next chapter

GREAT CHAPTER! Keep up the good work, happy holidays, and I hope you have a great time!

Super Story i was waiting so long. When comes The next Chapter?

I'm so sorry for your loss. I hope you become better.

Yay! Its great to hear from you again! Good chapter, I had to go over the lat few to refresh my memory on your story, thanks for the new awesome chapter. Congrats, I'll be waitin for the next one...

FREAKING FINALLY!

This was a very short chapter, which personally I don't like...plus there isint much that goes on in this chapter nor was most of it important to the plotline.

Plus im confused...didn't you have Carla sneak off to follow because shes afraid of her dad or crexis getting killed?

You really have to get this moving along buddy, if you drag this out its gonna get boring. I almost feel like the iona destruction should have happened 3 chapters ago. You don't need to have so many chapter to a story for it to be great! Look at sorrelwings "The Outcast" I believe it only had like 10 chapters...but each chapter veeeery long!

Another thing is you HAVE TO REMEMBER crexis is a chick! A chick! In human years he's 13. Im sorry but you sometimes make him sound and act like he's waaaaay older and he's not. YES he's very mature...but too mature...he is still a kid...remember that. The fact that he's the leader of this whole thing and that he had to take a leadership role like that (Everyone telling him about val) Just seems soooooooo unrealistic.

Im sorry if this review is disappointing to you but I have to give an honest review. Ill give this chapter 3 out of 10 brazil nuts

Personally I don't think you should do short chapters...and you really have to update like once a week because making your viewers wait this long for a chapter is what makes you lose fans.

Dude, please finish the story! I have been following it's progress for a few years now and not seen any further story's! So I beg of you, please finish it! There are very few stories out there as good as this one!

Finally a new chapter! Thank you very much jacobblue2000 but you have to give yourself some credit to buddy. I mean you have come along way from how you were writing in chapter 1 to how you write now.

This is a great chapter! Uh oh is Carla sneaking her away from her home and following the group of macaws fighting iona. Im glad crexis is trying to forgive his parents but it might take awhile before he forgives his dad, Roberto.

Crexis as usual is great, the way you portray him is great. Just don't make him to mature because he still is a chick after all.

Great job on this chapter! I am looking forward to how you handle action scenes for the iona fight.

Another thing I would like to mention...maybe try adding in some human parts because think about it...a giant flock of macaws flying in one direction...surely tulio and linda would find out...and it would be on the news

I give this chapter 8 out of 10 brazil nuts!