Loved this story

A delightful story! It felt like chapter 22 was an ending rather than propelling the story into a new segment.

I don’t know why he doesn’t want to tell Draco who the father is. I suspected some dark reason like rape. After the last chapter’s revelation of the child being a Weasley considering Ron was being paid to be his friend I suspected Ron might have been the father. Fred is a total surprise.

Hmm I wonder if Dumbledore raped him and is the father considering his apparent animosity towards him. Obviously the father is not just some random bloke.

This was a great story, thank you for writing it!

I know he wants to get Hermione And ron back but truly in the end it is their child that will suffer for all of this they could not take back what was already given but they could have stopped future pa yments

I think I read one of your stories before but I just read all of them in one go. I enjoyed them all greatly. I admit as the books wore on I became less of an Albus fan and Severus is, by far, my favorite so I like what you did with both (well when Severus survived). I hope you keep writing but if not know that people are still enjoying your work.

I love the twist you made here. It was different, the different that i was looking for. :) it was very nice. I really enjoyed your story.

I loved the last two chapters of this absolutely wonderful story! :D I'm sorry I couldn't read and review before now, but you know how real life can be at times... T_T Anyway, I like that everything worked out alright for Harry... I really loved this story! I hope to read you soon in another one! Kisses!

I liked reading your story. I like that harry got to be happy and that severus also found some happiness.

This was very choppy and hard to follow with the dialogue jumping around and only being half formed. It is a good plot, but you didn't even go into Draco and Harry having a relationship just bam their married and on their 2nd kid together.

Glad everyone was happy.

I don't read anything anymore that isn't complete, so I'm glad that it is. My only constructive criticism is to use a beta. I used to be one and a writer in another fandom with a different name. Unfortunately, I don't have the time to commit to it anymore. Right now I just try to make sure what I write is complete before posting, mainly because I know my time is limited and would end up with huge gaps if I didn't. Anyway, I hope you don't think that's rude. I just think everyone here probably wants to get better. I know I have.

With the anniversary and birthday in December Christmas is going to be a busy time of year for them.

A treehouse for a honeymoon sounds kind of fun.

That was an inventive proposal.