This was a great story, it’s a shame that a lot of great stories don’t get finished.

This is awesome, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Good story from a new up and cuming author. Keep up the good work. gr8 m8 i r8 8/8 no b8 m8.

"I will barely live to be a hundred, and that's if I don't get sick and die or get killed doing my job!"

Ahahaha, more hinting at Youkai Miko Reimu. Not that I expect you to admit it.

A point of dissent: Do people really do the whole "will you be my girlfriend?" thing in reality? The whole "making it 'official'" thing has really never happened in any of my relationships. It just seems kind of... childish, I guess. Like I feel like it would be more effective to not try applying labels so quickly. A rough sketch of what I'm thinking:

"Flan... we... that is I... I-I'm not sure..." Reimu stammered, trying to say far too much at once. Realising she had botched it, she shook her head vigorously, and tried again. "We haven't been friends for very long, but you said you loved me. I'm not sure if I feel the same, but I think I could. So, if you're willing to put up with my fumbling," she reached out to cup Flandre's cheek with one hand and the child-like vampire's hand came up to cover it with her own, tears coming unbidden to her eyes. "What's this," Reimu teased fondly, "no smart comebaMMPH!" Her jest was swallowed by a searching kiss.

"Silly Reimu, I don't get smart; I get even." Flandre grinned wide at the state of blushing mess she'd left her "prey" in. "Now get your cute tush to the roof before granny gets impatient!" The fanged smirk she cast behind her as she walked back inside said everything else that was needed.

... something like that. It just feels more genuine to me. Or, more importantly, it doesn't feel perfunctory.

Oh yeah baby! Some good steaming yuri kisses! Thus is always welcomed hehe~ Flrandre is so assertive and a teaser ha! Perfect for Reimu.

So Reimu will now train, that will be interesting, it's just like Freeza in the Revival of F, being a Hakurei she is already naturely powerfull, but if she trains properly, her strenght will improve immensely, looking foward to it, she'll need this if she wanna protect her girlfriend, for me Reimu is the most powerfull character in TouHou, she just don't have that post because of her lazyness of course.

Glad to see that youryou back and writing this absolutely amazing and fantabulous story. I hope to see the relation ship of Reimu and flandre grow more and maybe a bit more fluff. The conflict so far is exilently well set up. I really love this story. Keep up the amazing work

Please disregard my previous review as they talked about it during this chapter.

Reimu's ability is to float. Including the ability to 'float out of reality' if she isn't held back by spellcard rules she can literally just sit in invincibility and safely shoot anyone to death. Though I suppose you did say she was out of it but still.

OMG, you are alive! I was starting to wonder where you'd been and had the idea of emiling/PMing you at one point. I'm really glad you came back coz the last cliff-hanger was... painful.

I was starting to make scenarios what would happen to Reimu which included Flandre bitting her so she could become a vampire herself and save her "life" (technically, vampires aren't "alive"). So, to say the least, it did not go the way I just described and it suprised me.

Hopefully, the next chapter will come before the next one and half year.

Cheers!

I like this. More of this. This is a good thing.

This is pretty interesting. I think you might have gone a tad far in making Flandre too nice. Sure in canon she isn't the monster that fanon loves to portray, but at the same time she definitely had self control issues mixed with extreme power that were more because of her own nature and not due to the treatment of others.

In any case, I look forward to more.

So many cliffhangers can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow, this has to be one of my most favorite Touhou stories I have ever read! I liked it so much, in fact, that I made an account just so I could favorite the story/author and follow the progress!

Also YESS for uncommon couple: Flandre x Reimu, I've been searching for these two everywhere and so far this story has been my only saving grace!

I'm really hoping you continue this story!

Oooh conspiration development, so Black Magic Users, how Marisa will react to that? I quite interest to read it, Flandre rescuing her special person, yeah nice, the bastards must have had a painful death if they fought her, I think it would have been best if you have put something like Shin Ryuu instead of Great Dragon God, but is good anyway, keep up the amazing fic, I love it.

Really enjoying this so far. People usually ship Marisa or Meiling with Flan, so she really is a breath of fresh air.