Hi! I just read this one-shot and it is so good! I haven’t seen this episode in awhile, but this definitely makes me want to rewatch it! So touching, simple but sweet. Great work!

Really good story

Wow! I think I'm gonna cry... This was so good

Absolutely amazing! From the brief seconds that you see Donald's face before Leo says, "The guy... changing the locks on all the doors," You portrayed Donald's thoughts beautifully!

Wonderful story! Truly, truly fantastic. The emotion was heartbreaking. :'(

plz update. i need 2 know what happens next.

This was so sweet and cute and good. You really got down the love a father has for his children, and potrayed Donald very well. Awesome job!

Well, there go my emotions :,(

Oh...ouch. Nice look into Donald's head after losing the kids.

Aww that scene broke my heart; Donald wants to find his kids and then keep them safe.

Hi! Here's my review as promised!

As I have said the first time, I love this story. I think it really captured the essence of the scene. That moment was just so sad. It gets me every time! How you expanded that in this story makes me want to cry even more!

As I've also mentioned, the three rules format is just outstanding. I LOVE how you added character depth, even to the lab! That description of what Donald could see (the crumbles, the shoes, the phone) just blew my mind.

For real, Keys. I think your awesome writing is just generally not good for my health. :P

Great job and keep up the good work!

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No other words for it. Incredible.

Tears have made their way to my eyes and have stayed. This is just a beautiful piece of writing. Speechless.

Love it love it