Great story

Love it

where the hell is Alice?! she would complicated matter if she join james

aw, this complicates a lot. and I am wondering how she didn't have a breakdown seeing Alice so blank. fearing it's her fault.

I thought she didn't like attention

Flirtatious sassy Maddy has won my heart! So happy to finally see them interacting with each other, and loving the ease in which she has seemed to befriend the vampire teens! I really hope we get to see a side of Rosalie we normally wouldn't have. Keep up the great work!

Wow. Just wow! This was such a refreshing approach to what I know will undoubtedly be an amazing story. I loved that you changed it just enough to keep it new and exciting while simultaneously keeping to the familiarity of the novels and the movies. For some reason I believe that 28 chapters just wont be enough for me!

I really like the story... I just pretend the whole clothing situation doesn't exists. No offence to you! I had my goth phase in middle school and I still love black. It's just a over the top for me so I kinda read over it.. Keept it up, the story itself is pretty nice :)

LOL. This chapter is a favorite of mine.

I could totally imagine Jasper brainstorming ways to get rid of a danger magnet like Bella, especially with his military background. It’s sweet that his love for Maddy stops him from though. I’m not really a big fan of this Bella and Edward, so I was amused by his thoughts.

Maddy is my favorite character. I swear Bella had zero personality in the movies. Maddy is so lively and fun. I also like that she gets along with Rose.

this has got to be one of my favourite JasperxOC fics ever! I love how it went in deep into their relationship and the story is not just following along canon plot points. so excited to read the next book!

Maybe during New Moon, during Halloween break or something Maddy could go and visit Peter and Charlotte with Jasper but she tells her dad she's going to visit her friends in phoenix for a few days and she could also go and visit the cullen's when she knows Edward won't be there during the Christmas holidays for just over a week and she tells her dad she's visiting the cullen's because he knows she is still with jasper but they don't tell Bella.

When Alice sees the future she can see humans and vampires because she used to be a human and now she's a vampire but she can't see the wolves or hybrids because she's not one, but Maddy can see vampires and she's not a vampire so will she be able to have visions of the wolves and hybrids, I think she should so her powers are a little bit different from Alice's.

Go Jasper!