Oh this is so cute!

Nice.

Nice!

For some reason jon mclaughlins you are the one I love, I loved it! I found it to be very well done, and intriguing.

Hello. A good one, albeit the effort it takes for me to keep track of the years, which I actually did. Which brings me to this...:

"1985
James holds his brother's hand
when he stops breathing.
He cries, he cries, he cries."

I presume '1985' is supposed to be '1975' instead, because earlier you had an insert in '1976' in which James wished for a brother, etc.

So yup. Other than thar tiny, eeny, mistake (I presume) which NO ONE should've spotted unless there's something wrong with them, it is a fun journey.

a little unconvential but really good and interesting, at first i was a little confused with the changing years but it is a really interesting make up and i kinda love the idea of a dangerous rhodey and well, really really good, look forward to your next work