Rearead this 5 years after you wrote it. Would have loved to see you continue it. Trying to stop Roshi from harrasing young women is one of two ways for Video to meet Gohan prior to school. The other would be similar to the tournament in the Bojack movie. I wish there were more of them.

Don't stop now! Please continue writing. Please update!

love this, i will be checking your profile for a sequel. if there isn't one please make one

I need more of this! Why isn't there more of this? T-T

I really liked this story, too bad n one can continue it.

very good and very original

J'ai adoré.

Oh dear! I really wish this was a multi chapter fic, it would be awesome. This kind of fiction is a little hard to find (or I'm doing my search the wrong way), a fic that mentions the actual history of dragon ball, many focus on cell because its the most recent event, but there was also piccolo daimao senior, goku was actually spotted by reporters and made TV apparition (accidentally, of course)...

Sigh... There are so much things that could be used and aren't...

So I love this piece like no other!

This looks really interesting a pity you didn't continue it

Now this is an intriguing idea! The idea of Videl discovering other more powerful martial artists and seeking them out for knowledge is one that really appeals to me and it was handled fairly believably.

With that said I did find a few things odd, Yamcha trained with Roshi for three years and was deemed a pupil of the Turtle school (Plus I confess Yamcha enjoying the night life feels a bit weird to me, but that's just me) Plus the nickname also feels kind of... odd.

I thought the descriptions, especially the fights were strong and fast paced. Wouldn't Tenshinhan be stronger than Krillen? I mean I know he has three eyes but earth has cat and dog people as well. The dialogue was as a whole pretty solid and distinctive with each character having a fairly distinctive 'voice' which is important to a story.

Overall I am eager to see where this goes.

this story have a sequel?

I
NEED
MORE

Why is this a one-shot? It's one of the most interesting premises I've ever seen! Please don't leave us hanging, I'm sure many readers are dying to see things play out. Please continue the story!

That's not an ending to a oneshot, it just feels like an opening chapter it really does.

this is so good id really love to read more.