Great job shame you stopped writing

s rank mission are only for anbus dude seriously be real

that was good keep the chapters coming

its good but should calm down the funny dramatics like the come to frost whatever and add more descriptions like he walked and grasped the hilt of frostmourne

Little bitch naruto

Lost interest when you started added oc

Well time to remove your stories from my wait page.

Why would Maito Gai still be in the village but some like Kurenai went to peotect the Daimyō that makes absolutely no sense in terms of the best Jōnin going

This chapter is damn near a photocopy real original I could see copying a plot or concept but to basically copy another authors work to the point of plagiarism is just wrong

Two wives of the hokage have been from the Uchiha? Where and when did he learn all those jutsu and sealing barriers?

Naruto suddenly has access to water, earth, fire and lightning? I thought he just graduated the academy? He couldn't learn all those Justus from reading at the library or everyone would also know them all wouldn't they?

I have said the bulk of it in electric dragon on Konoha buy again good luck with your life

Please update

Needs work lot's of work
-the story is good but projected wrong
-characters are bland (each feel like "o humm, o well, the world ended what can you do, whatever.)
- mostly just Q&A segments connected by little story.

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