Awesome job!

Wow, I absolutely also loved this little RS fanfiction! (I didn't know you had another one until I actually clicked your profile and just had to read :P)
The entire thing was short but oh so beautifully written. I especially love the descriptions of Tooth & her mini fairies in Jack's perspective, and anyways all-in-all, again, this was lovely.

Another fave for you!—'Cause ya deserve it! :D

Really cute and really well written.

This was so adorable! It's well-crafted, as well as an interesting look into Jack's past. I especially loved the line about how Jack heard tales of a queen, a fierce warrior shaped by tragedies and sorrow. Wow! You're a great writer!

Wow, you are a talented writer! I've read quite a few of these kind of fics and I think that yours is great. You should definitely carry on writing other stories. I can't get enough of Rainbow
Snowcone so the more stories you write, the better!