This story was wonderful. I love the plot line and the story all together. I wish that there was sequel to this story.

I'm glad you did! Thank you for letting us know. Will you also be posting this story on AO3, and is the version that's here on FFN the edited version?

OMG...this story was so amazing! I loved every minute of it (some more than others, but still...). You captured all of the characters so incredibly well.

What a wonderful, heart moving and a delightful way to end such a fantastic story.
I have thoroughly enjoyed every moment of Amelia's adventure and I am so thrilled that it ended the way it did. Not just for her but for Josh, Fili, Kili, Thorin and the company too. Beautifully written, beautifully thought out and beautifully entertaining ... Thank you so much! xxx

Seriously, I can visulise it all and it's exactly how I picture how the ending of BOTFA should have been. Everything from Bofur retelling his versions of events, to Ori scribbling everything down, to Fili and Kili laughing their beards off to Gandalf sitting back blowing smoke rings into the air to Bilbo, our beloved Bilbo, sitting among the company he now truly see's as friends and family. This is perfect.
Beautifully written, you have no idea how many feels I had during this chapter and I for one cannot wipe the smile off my face!

OH MY GOODNESS! And I will say it again! Oh my goodness!
So it would appear Tolkien has the ability to wander between realms. That is beyond perfect!
I am not going to lie, you had me in tears when she realised who the graves represented. I actually thought their was no hope, that Amelia would not be able to save them, but Tolkien you brilliant man! Cannot wait to read on!

... wow, I am lost for words. I never expected that to happen! There is so much at stake here and Amelia, bless her heart, is carrying so much upon her shoulders. I really do hope that she manages to succeed and in turn come back to help her family

I was on the edge of my seat the entire time reading this ...
Many times during this I found myself unable to continue and I dread to find out what happens next even though I need too! Beautifully written!

Oh my goodness! Oh my goodness! I should have seen that coming but I didn't! I am beyond shocked at what they have just done! How in Mahals Beard will she act when she wakes! Looking forward to reading on

Another enjoyable and well written chapter. Considering the nature of Dwarves and how much longer it can take for them to trust one not their own, this is very realistic and I like it a lot. It seems more natural for the Dwarves to act this way, especially when Amelia openly insulted their King like that. I was hoping that they would be able to reconcile in the morning, that Fili and the others who are not angry with the duo had been able to convince Thorin, but that appears to not be the case ...
I cannot believe you have left it like this. I look forward to reading on!

Poor Fili. When you look at it from his point of view, you can truly see how much weight he had on his shoulders. Among other things (being heir, proving oneself etc), he had a younger brother to protect and one can understand why he would suffer with nightmares.
I really do like the pinky swear promise between them though, that really is sweet :)

*sniggers* I love how Amelia is just getting through the evening just by telling herself it is a dream. And I take it she isn't fond of hairy men? I wonder if that will change... xD
I look forward to reading on and finding out how Thorin will react when he finds two more have been added to his company without his knowledge

*waves* I have just stumbled upon this and since I am a curious butterfly, decided to have a nose. I am pleased that I have :)
A very intriguing start with two interesting OC's. So Amelia's recollection of what happens in Middle Earth is fading? That is interesting... I wonder whether she will ever remember, or if the journey will be as new to her as it is for those venturing on it. I look forward to finding out what happens next x

Your story was really great.(could of done some P.O.V.S here and their though just saying)the final three chapters to the story almost made me up the great work.

So good. Now, to start the sequel! Well, tomorrow to start the sequel.