| Reviews for JLU: Ultimate Hero |
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   Starlord Master chapter 1 . 2/12 Good story. |
| GurlizFanBoi chapter 1 . 9/30/2019 Omg! Gimme that next chap! XD WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN!? I hope you'll continue, it is a fricking honor to read. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/20/2019 Ben/Wonder Woman |
| Dark and Light Balances chapter 1 . 9/20/2019 Ben x Wonder Woman |
| joshua.feijo10 chapter 1 . 5/31/2019 aaahhhh cade |
| BlazeStryker chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 I have theories, not that they much matter now. Hawk became Monarch in one of the many "meh" Crises, one they didn't even bother to name as a Crisis. I can see Hawk and Dove playing a role to try to arrange the players in advance if they got powerful, to be honest. |
| PrincessBloodBlossom chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 The story seems awesome, so far and I really want to see it continue so please keep writing it or say it's up for adoption so some else can finish it , because this story is too good a thing to let die on your channel! So please, continue it. :3 |
| Soron66 chapter 1 . 1/30/2018 A) this story has clearly been abandoned so you should put "Discontinued" in the description B) this has more dialogue than descriptions C) chapter 1 should NOT be short. It's always the prologues that are short D) When people start a collab together, or any story really, you should see it through to the end. that's what i'm doing with my collab colleague Omnitrix1. If you guys need any inspiration or great examples description-wise. look at our Before the Crisis: Tales of the Multiverse story. i'm not advertising even though it looks like it right now. i merely suggested you to so you guys would be able to add more than dialogues, cause right now... your story is a freaking script. scripts should be reserved for tv shows and movies not normal stories or fanfictions. this is my honest opinion, and it was as helpful and kind as i could make it. |
| Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 9/25/2017 Interesting. |
| xenosaiyan chapter 1 . 1/17/2017 Lol. I loved the new chapter, it's very good. Keep up the good work. Also your brother/ cousin (Sorry, I can't remember) inspired me to write my own fanfic. I would love it if you read and comment on how I could do better, due to me being a novice at writing. |
| Lucifer Jr chapter 1 . 7/4/2016 It looks really good so far. There's just one thing you need to do to make it better. Want to know what that is? UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! |
| Abigaming chapter 1 . 5/23/2016 I like the warblly ending. As I say it is a word, so warblly shall be! Also, it's a lot longer than I could ever make it. |
| Angry lil' elf chapter 1 . 3/18/2016 Seems like a good story, I do hope you continue it :) |
| christopherrhaydon chapter 1 . 2/23/2016 UPDATE ASAP:)! |
