I really like it how you make every character still in- well, character. Not one of them is ooc (in my opinion at least)

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Sooo awesome! Really enjoying this story keep it up

Quite the intresting story so far. I came here for the tanng but the zutara is just as good.

Okay, my browser crashed no less than three times while I was trying to read this. Annoying! But the concept of this story was really intriguing so I kept going back to , clicking through everything, and scrolling through all of the stories to find this. Yay!

Anyway, I really like concept of our favorite gang all grown up with child troubles now. I always love seeing Zuko in stories and I really enjoy that you brought Ursa back too. Despite all of the rough and gruff, Zuko is a mama's boy. I think that she will be a really powerful character in this story. I am excited to see Kiyi too! Super excited to see how they fit into this story.

I will mention from the other chapters I have read up to this point that I also really liked that you brought back stuff from the series, such as Aang's son using the trick that we all know and love from Season 1 when he was desperately hoping that Katara would notice and love him. I am wondering if in your story he still has feelings for Katara? It sounds like she is over him but he seemed so sad and deflated when her reaction to Gyatso's trick was met with more excitement lol. Poor guy.

I only have two suggestions. You tell us a lot about what has happened in character's thoughts. I think that it would have been really powerful for us to not have known what happened with Mai until Katara met Zuko and he spoke to her. Combined with the fact that Megara is sickly, I think this would have been really emotional. It also adds anticipation for the reader to not know ZOMG where is Mai? D: Why is Zuko emoz again?

BUT I am really looking forward to seeing how Katara and Zuko will react when they see each other after all of this time. It seems that the last time they saw each other they were hammered. Also, I really like Roku's character so far. I love little kiddos and he seems adorable. I can't wait to see what will happen when he meets his dad and Grandma and everyone. It's going to be a big day for him, haha!

Also, when changing scenes it is helpful for my small brain if there are line breaks. You jumped right from Zuko's perspective to the Bei Fong mansion.

As for Toph and Lin, I love that Toph is teaching her daughter how to earth bend. She might be rough and tough but I love to see her mama bear-ing out on her daughter. Yay! :)

Good work, I am excited to see where this goes!

Love to read more:)

Very good story, cant wait for the next chap

When are you going to updated for "A look into the future"

You have an interesting story. I feel like more explanation needs to go into some things–it's moving too fast–but other than that, it's all right.

I also noticed you misspelled several names (it's Hakoda, not Hadoka, Mai, not Mei and Appa, not Oppa). Another note is that when using a possessive, you need an apostrophe: whose glider is this? It's Aang's glider. Not Aangs glider.

Soo, all in all, not bad. Just a few minor notes :)

I've been out of fanfic for a while and your story really brought me back to my roots. You seem to be a good writer and you've created an interesting plot. Hope to read more.