Interesting start. Just so you know; the Monarch(King or Queen) is always addressed as "Your Majesty". The Princess or the Prince is addressed as "Your Highness", or even "Your Royal Highness".

Just randomly found this story and I really like it. Its well written and I'm just curious to know if you plan to continue it or not. :) I hope so!

:)

please pleaseee .. give Hans a heart .. I mean, he MUST feel something for Elsa? and I'd love to see some sexual tension between them .. love your writing btw

UPDATE! Can't wait to read more of your great writing!

More please

*-* I love aggressive!Hans too! He is such a manipulative bastard, and I love that Elsa isn't falling for him and that he isn't allowing this to dent his confidence a jot *-*

Hans, you are pushing the berserk buttons like crazy, but I cannot help admiring you for it. So much snarky perfection *-*

I think I am in love with jerk!Hans *-*

I love this story! I hope you will keep updating, Because its great! :D

AHHHHHHH I LOVE THIS SO MUCH.
I cannot wait for the next chapter, this story is simply perfection!
You are a breath taking writer and you have done justice to these characters.
Simply impeccable and well done *all the claps*

Anna and Elsa have the cutest sisterly bond ever, I liked how you captured it in the little moments in the fic and man Hans is such a sweet talker, his silver tongue is criminal ;) I do enjoy aggressive Hans, it's a very attractive look on him, and I think soon Elsa will see so too.

Very good plot! Seems interesting!

An update, huzzah! I continue to totally enjoy the way get into our protagonists' heads (protagonist being a very liberal term in Hans' case - I do love every bit of him in this, especially how he balked at the 'just you' comment :P). And all the bits between Anna and Elsa were lovely, I really liked seeing them govern together and how important it was for Elsa to have her sister's support in this difficult task.

Take all the time you need for the next chapter, this wonderful story is definitely worth the wait!

Hans is getting interesting ― and I like that he's playing a bigger role in this chapter than the others. As in, going out and doing some field works, and I don't know why, but I particularly enjoy their interaction when Elsa said, "Oh Hans. It's just you." That really hit him hard, I could see ― which totally sent me grinning from ear to ear. And I personally love (LOVE) how Elsa's not exactly tripping on her feet towards Hans' charms. She shouldn't.

Can I also note that I love aggressive!Hans. I mean, the way you line up his thoughts and presented his action had me yelling "YES" all to myself. Yeah, I'm a creep like that. The way you ended up this chapter was OHMYGOSH TOTALLY FRICKISHLY AMAZING ― "...frankly, he can't wait to watch her fall apart in his hands." ― IT WAS THE BEST (excuse for the language) MOTHERFUCKIN LINE IN THE WHOLE ICEBURNS FANDOM I HAVE EVER HEARD.

So, please keep the updates coming, 'cause I can't wait to see where this plot is going.

gustin puckerman
PS: good luck on your midterms!