| Reviews for The Fabricated Mission |
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jgpanda14 chapter 1 . 6/24/2015 I haven't been on here I a while but i really enjoyed reading this again! Good job! |
BookishBlues chapter 1 . 1/29/2015 So sweet! |
DreamingOnACloud chapter 1 . 12/29/2014 I'm so sorry i took forever to review... I dont even know why but i think i saw your message and then didnt have time... Then forgot... Anyways... Sorry but this story is so ADORABLE. Its been a while since I've read Gallagher Girl fanfics but this reminds me why i loved them so much :) Plus, I'm a complete sucker for Zammie! PS. Is the Russian real? Or did you just make up words? Sorry for such the late review, but hopefully it's better late than never :) |
owlishwolves chapter 1 . 8/19/2014 Love it! So sweet! |
the7thflockmember chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 As your (could-be) Beta, I'm incredibly proud. It's so good! Will you be writing any more? |
a fan chapter 1 . 5/9/2014 .GOSH. sooooooooooooo cutie |
cjffletcher chapter 1 . 4/26/2014 Cute story. I was truly convinced this was some huge important mission and not a big romantic proposal. (Don't get me wrong the end was still very romantic. I just meant that it was exacted very nicley.) overall great story! |
Rain Pours Down chapter 1 . 2/25/2014 Love it! |
Justswim2013 chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 Such a good story! It actually tricked me into believing it was a real mission! |
You-Just-Might chapter 1 . 2/20/2014 Hey Smirk and Walk Away. That was awesome. I totally didn't guess that the mission was fabricated. In fact, I spent the whole thing extremely worried that something was going to go very wrong because of how worried you made Cammie. Good job! One suggestion: Pay attention to your tenses (i.e. past tense, present tense, future tense). I found that you sometimes flipped between past tense and present tense, but it wasn't that often and that is a very easy thing to do. Other than that, great job! I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your stories:) |
maycontestdrew chapter 1 . 2/17/2014 Awww, so sweeeeeeeet! :') |
crazyshay77 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014 Whoa. Definitely didn't see that ending coming! Took me by surprise, and I love this story even more because of it! It's really good(e)! |
BunnySwag101 chapter 1 . 2/12/2014 That was soo sweet aww! |
kaitgirl chapter 1 . 2/11/2014 I loved it! |
AsianSpy chapter 1 . 2/11/2014 This is such a good oneshot! I loved it, and you should really think about doing maybe a series of oneshots or a full story. You have potential! :) |