Reviews for The Fabricated Mission
jgpanda14 chapter 1 . 6/24/2015
I haven't been on here I a while but i really enjoyed reading this again! Good job!
BookishBlues chapter 1 . 1/29/2015
So sweet!
DreamingOnACloud chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
I'm so sorry i took forever to review... I dont even know why but i think i saw your message and then didnt have time... Then forgot... Anyways... Sorry but this story is so ADORABLE. Its been a while since I've read Gallagher Girl fanfics but this reminds me why i loved them so much :) Plus, I'm a complete sucker for Zammie! PS. Is the Russian real? Or did you just make up words?

Sorry for such the late review, but hopefully it's better late than never :)
owlishwolves chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Love it! So sweet!
the7thflockmember chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
As your (could-be) Beta, I'm incredibly proud. It's so good! Will you be writing any more?
a fan chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
.GOSH. sooooooooooooo cutie
cjffletcher chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
Cute story. I was truly convinced this was some huge important mission and not a big romantic proposal. (Don't get me wrong the end was still very romantic. I just meant that it was exacted very nicley.) overall great story!
Rain Pours Down chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Love it!
Justswim2013 chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Such a good story! It actually tricked me into believing it was a real mission!
You-Just-Might chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
Hey Smirk and Walk Away.

That was awesome. I totally didn't guess that the mission was fabricated. In fact, I spent the whole thing extremely worried that something was going to go very wrong because of how worried you made Cammie. Good job!

One suggestion: Pay attention to your tenses (i.e. past tense, present tense, future tense). I found that you sometimes flipped between past tense and present tense, but it wasn't that often and that is a very easy thing to do.

Other than that, great job! I really enjoyed it and look forward to reading more of your stories:)
maycontestdrew chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Awww, so sweeeeeeeet! :')
crazyshay77 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
Whoa. Definitely didn't see that ending coming! Took me by surprise, and I love this story even more because of it! It's really good(e)!
BunnySwag101 chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
That was soo sweet aww!
kaitgirl chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
I loved it!
AsianSpy chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
This is such a good oneshot! I loved it, and you should really think about doing maybe a series of oneshots or a full story. You have potential! :)