This is a great story. I sure hope you haven't given up on it. :-)

Pretty good story! :)

Yay! A new chapter. You are alive. (Snicker) I knew you were. As always, what's up with Bones, Suzanne and Kahn's son? I know. One thing at a time. :D

Awesome. I love the story so far-it's great! There are a few minor typos, but, all in all, it seems pretty flawless. And you nailed Spock and Khan dead on! Great job!

Epic place to stop at! I can't wait to know what will happen next! :)

I want to read more about a naked and chained Kahn!

Yah! I needed this chapter. Woke up with a headache and chills. This story make me feel so much better. I love this western feel to the story. It's so much like the original Star Trek series.

Oh, dear lord. How I wish this chapter continued. This is great stuff. I love the humor. It's the best.
And showing how Augments have feelings. ...awwwwwesome!

A shirtless and wet Kahn. A bunch of drunk Augments. Sounds like my kind of party. MEOW.

With all the "fun" going on, I'm still struck with Kahn's sadness. It's awesome. You are giving him the depth of character that it always needed. Good job!

Hopefully he can cling to life because of his son. I love that Kirk and Khan seem to be getting closer. :D

I love your dragon references in describing Kahn (remnants of Smaug). And the tanks painted black to stand out against the enemy. ...the Red Baron!

Oh holy crap that chapter was hot. I loved their victory celebration with the augment women celebrating life by conquering Khan after he conquered the enemies. Lovely image, and Khan that way is just so hot! :D3

Tanks, blood, and sex. Kahn's history is, to quote an old friend, fascinating!

Kahn is such a bad ass, but he has a conscience. Am very much enjoying the hurt of Kahn that we are learning from Joachim. Waiting for the comfort. :p