| Reviews for Elephants |
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derektomlinson chapter 1 . 8/13/2019 lol garfield saying to raven why did the half demon cross the street raven saying to garfield the half demon cross the street to slap my idiot boyfriend from telling jokes about me |
Iship3it chapter 1 . 6/4/2015 Hahaha! I gotta say, I liked this one even better than the first! I loved the style. Just their rapid dialog was hilarious! |
HunterMoore chapter 1 . 5/7/2015 Awesome story, very well done. |
krostovikraven1 chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 It was so funny, they totally forgot about the mission. Poor Robin, no one listens to him. |
TriforceLink205 chapter 1 . 9/3/2014 The quick switches between characters for dialogue were awesome! It was great. :) |
Just Smile D chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 You, my dear, are a truly amazing writer. You got their personalities just right! |
Haebris chapter 1 . 5/24/2014 The sign of a good one shot is that I want it to continue further than it does. Short and sweet and is a good little microcosm for their relationship as a whole. |
The Harry Wompa chapter 1 . 5/20/2014 you definitely have a gift with writing conversations, something I'm not too good at. I really like your work, look forward to reading more. |
CleoArrow chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 Ha, ha, ha this was very funny! Their conversation was the best and very in character; I could always tell who was talking even without the description. Great work! |
TheRagingRussian chapter 1 . 3/19/2014 I liked that one a lot. |
gwb620 chapter 1 . 3/18/2014 I'm not much of a writer, so I'll just go ahead and state I really enjoyed it. Poor Beast Boy will never get to tell his joke XD |
Alec33 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014 This was hilarious and seems very difficult to get everything to mesh perfectly. Well done! |
moreorlessanonymous chapter 1 . 2/18/2014 I haven't read your first story, but this one is really cute and well done. I like the Cyborg/Velma joke, and the dialogue. You've got a way with using it to the story/plot's advantage. That, and this feels almost completely natural as a titan instance, right down to Cy catching the baddie by himself ("Divide and Conquer" Cinderblock takedown anyone?) In conclusion, good job, and please keep on going. I think for my part I'll go read your other story now. |
Stella Bella 123 chapter 1 . 2/13/2014 This is absolutely amazing! Wonderful; the dialogue was flawlessly hilarious! |
George Lull chapter 1 . 2/12/2014 Give me and A, Give me a W, give me and E, give me- Okay, okay, i'll stop, just to say it was AWESOME! :D I so want more but I know it's just a one time thing... (Hopefully not talking about BBRae here xP) Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this one shot and I think i'll go and see what else you have in store! ;) |