Cute

Also hinata keeps going back and forth calling naruto naruto-chan, san and kun...its naruto-kun!

Okay my number one complaint is your quotations..."blah blah." nlah blah." thats not how they work...! like the story though

finishedd. I did enjoy this, my opinions still stand firmly. The characters are OOC, the development kinda off, the conversation does not flow that naturally.

But, strangely, despite all, I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for writing

one thing before I forget... Hinata does not stutter in everytime she speaksbut up until this chapter you made her stutter in every dialogues she hadBut despite that, I’m still enjoying this tbh, just consider this constructive criticism or whatever XD

this version of Sasuke is angry allll the time, as I was reading this chapter I was like, “chill, Sasuke..”

Ok.. what an intriguing start. Something that has irked me though, the repetitions of “the uchiha heir that, the uchiha heir this, etc” in a single chapter! And Sasuke was wayyy too brutal.. (if the last fight between Sasuke and Naruto were taken into account, but I guess that wasn’t the case here?). Not that he was polite, but after the war this shouldn’t be how he has changed. He should’ve been more human (aka polite) in interacting with other people lol not cold-bloodedly giving away death threats. But this is fanfiction, and Naruto is married to Sakura... so I guess this story is prone to alteration...

Very beautiful story. I love it! Great work!

Honestly one if the best fanfics I’ve read I loved it

I think your really good at the romance part of the story but whenever there is action you seem to not know what your going. I mean you had the Shinobi literally stand there and do nothing while people were taken. sasukes been nerfed the fuck out of when facing Hinata and you just let stupid thing happen when action goes on.

Loved it

I didn't like the friendship between Naruto and Sasuke I felt that they always had a special bond. However, judging it on the overall story alone, it was amazing! I loved this one. It was also very well written you did a great job!

I really like this story but this sasuke acts like a mix between naruto and kiba and sasuke.

Yeah, Sasuke talking to Naruto like that should've ended up with foot to the teeth. This Sasuke is just an annoying shit.

Amazing story I loved it!