| Reviews for Labyrinth |
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guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2017 Good, though a pity there was no more |
Mikuqueen chapter 3 . 6/12/2017 I know Im incredibly late but...Do u plan on writing anymore. |
Noxxus chapter 3 . 7/29/2016 I'm agonizing right now. I want to read more. But the last time I read a fic involving these kinds of themes I was depressed for months. FastForward's Roommates did a number on me and I feel like this could do the same. Your fic is awesome but I don't think I'm coming back for my own mental health. Good luck! |
lazyfox21 chapter 1 . 6/8/2016 Why is that? |
professionalVamp chapter 3 . 6/7/2016 :D |
L YNAL chapter 2 . 5/24/2016 I am loving this! Please continue and update! |
SweetHunniiBunnii chapter 2 . 4/29/2016 Pretty interesting plot! Nice work! (: |
Yay sasunaru chapter 2 . 4/27/2016 Yay can't wait to read more. I'm sorta new to fanfiction so i never had a chance to read it the first time but I'm glad i did today. Anyways please update soon, i wanna see where naru got those injuries. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Good start to this story. I like that there's already some mystery with Naruto and Kiba. They both seem nice, but Kiba was apparently seen with all the victims right before they disappeared, and Naruto has strange bruises around her neck that she's trying to hide. Does she have an abusive parent or boyfriend? Are they from fights she gets into? Or could it be a struggling victim was the one who gave them to her? My only word of caution for this fic is that I've seen other people try to do high school "undercover" fics, and they just end up as boring old high school fics. The author starts off well with making the MC into a police officer who is investigating a crime, but that only lasts for a couple of chapters. Once the fic gets going, the author usually abandons the investigation to make the MC start acting like a normal high school student who goes to parties and makes friends. The investigation doesn't get mentioned again until the last couple of chapters when the MC is forced to catch the criminal so the author can end the fic. Personally, I read this type of fic because I want an investigation. I don't want a high school fic bookended by an investigation. I'm hoping you'll stick with the investigation plot because Sasuke is older than the other characters and not too interested in repeating high school. He wouldn't care about going to parties unless he thought he could get some evidence from it. |
arashi0kage chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Well done , keeps the interest |
CloudySkies2208 chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Wait... Where's the second chapter? |
DovahStark chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 I like the first chapter keep it coming |
DrippySpaff chapter 1 . 4/25/2016 Yes please. |
CloudySkies2208 chapter 2 . 1/23/2015 It's been a months since your last update... please update soon... i love your story |
Winged-Ashes chapter 2 . 8/30/2014 This is interesting I like it |