| Reviews for Battle Cry |
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AshleyEvans306715 chapter 27 . 10h omg! how can you just leave us with that cliffhanger?! Levi kissed her! ahdjcdfcjakmdx I'm dying to know what happens next T.T I really like Uma. She's a well developed character and has her fair share of flaws, which I appreciate. I also like the relationship development between her and the member's of Levi's squad, and Levi himself of course. |
Michelle Staufen chapter 27 . 8/6 Hello, When is the next chapter coming? I need more! :) Would it help to know I finished this whole thing in one night and now I'm like wait where is the next chapter?! |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29 Woahhh, your OC’s really cool! |
Sera Lendhein chapter 27 . 7/18 OH MY GOD, YOU LEFT IT THERE, HOLY SHIT, WHYYYYYYYYYYY. This is so incredibly good. Like, holy shit. HOLY SHIT, WHY IS IT SO GOOD?! You're a fantastic writer, you have Levi just so well portrayed, I don't know how you do it and I'm losing my mind. I wish this was longer and preferably complete. But I know sometimes life gets in the way or writer's block or just lack of interest, so thank you for sharing this story with us as far as you did. Hope you update it some day. It's good as FUCK. |
Sar chapter 4 . 6/15 This both hurt and filled my heart to the brim. I miss the Levi squad so much - it's always the most difficult scene for me to watch. You did a great job at writing them all, especially Oluo and his frantic behavior. I enjoyed watching Uma come more into her own here, showing them her skills and boundaries instead of going with the flow in this new, advanced squad. And Levi... of course Levi is perfect. As always! |
Sar chapter 3 . 6/15 STOP I'm smiling like a goof. "You want to watch me piss too, Belova?" HAVE YOU EVER HEARD A MORE CANON LEVI COMMENT?! It's incredible. I loved reading Uma's confusion and anxiety being promoted to this squad with little idea why or how to get where she was going. The imagery of her walking around the quiet, early morning site was pleasant and calming to read. I can't wait for more! |
Sar chapter 2 . 6/15 This was great as far as Levi's POV goes! Its a difficult task to recreate his mannerisms while trying to have him interact with a character of your own and I think you did an amazing job. A line of his that really stood out to me was "My only thought as I swung down towards her was for her to wait a damn minute." HAHAHA, this is hilariously Levi - she's imagining her instant death and he's annoyed he won't stay calm. Thank you again! |
Sar chapter 1 . 6/15 Rewatching AOT to prepare for last season goodness and started craving reading this story again! Levi is courageous and a saint (wbk) but its so refreshing seeing him this way earlier on due to this timeline. It feels weird seeing Uma scream for help knowing how stubborn and independent she is later in the story but it truly shows her change of character and how much she values her humanity & life. Her internal conflict and statement of owing Levi is wonderful to read! Thank you for writing 3 |
Artemis615 chapter 27 . 5/22 Wait wait wait! That's it?! Nono don't stop there its just getting so good! Please continue! |
suga.jeons chapter 3 . 4/30 OML I'm dying "you want to watch me piss too, Belova?" is probably something Levi'd say to someone xD |
Berrybluexd chapter 27 . 4/23 I started reading your fanfic today and just finished it. It’s been 2 years or so that you haven’t updated so I’m mot sure if you’ll continue or not. Regardless of that, I’d like to praise you for your amazing writing! You did it so amazingly that I lost 2-3h of my study time to read it LOL |
amberandthings chapter 27 . 4/10 My god I just read through all that in a few hours. I’m having faith—please come back and finish! |
baignoire chapter 26 . 4/3 Jesus. Fucking. Christ. That was a rollercoaster of emotions. I read all 27 chapters in about 5 hours and honestly I have to say, that this is one of the best stories involving Levi and an OC that I've ever read. This story does Levi justice and he's acting exactly as I would've imagined him to act. Also Uma is a great OC and I love how consistent her character/ personality is and that it's not over the place like the most stories I've read. I honestly don't know what to say except that you're a great writer and this is an amazing story. I couldn't stop reading it and I just wanted to say that I would love a continuation to this. I hope my review motivates you, because believe me you are an amazing writer and I TRULY HOPE that you'll update :D️ |
kailanajt chapter 15 . 3/22 its often really hard to find levi fanfics this well executed. like thank you for this. |
kailana chapter 8 . 3/21 this story is fucking amazing. |