please make another chapter you should become a writer please make another chapter the suspence is killing me

Aw! This is a really cute story. Nice work!

This is one of the best Frozen Fanfictions I've read! 3

amazing work i love it! and so sweet! and i'm like that too! i won't tell someone when i'm feeling sick!

I'll say it; that was adorable :) More please!

I'm a sucker for hurt/comfort fics like this, especially Elsa-centric ones because I adore her. Contrary to what most people think, in my opinion family love is very pure and a step higher than romantic love. Beautiful job portraying that. :)

So ADORBS!

Aw, now Elsa needs to be taken care of. No sickness for her. Yuck.

LOVE IT!

I love this!

Oh man, this is adorable. The scene with Olaf and Elsa was so visual and lovely; I could picture them perfectly in my mind's eye. Thanks for this :)

Love it! Especially the part of Olaf and Elsa sitting back to back. So sweet!

You've done it again! 3 Awww, Olaf! And I didn't think the ending was too sentimental. I loved it. I also loved the references to the original Snow Queen story. Keep up the good work! -Lee

-reads nice sentimental fic-

Y'know, I was quite happy with how this fic panned out, until you quoted from Tangled. Elsa and Anna's relationship is different from Rapunzel and Gothel, because in the latter's, there is a third party in the relationship. Rapunzel's hair.

Gothel tells Rapunzel she loves her. (Obligetory)
Rapunzel replies by telling her she loves her more. (Actual love)
Gothel says she loves her most to Rapunzel's HAIR.

So, using that here for Elsa and Anna doesn't really work. Other than that, I pretty much enjoyed it. 78.5/100

Tangled reference!