omg, you have given me a mighty need for more!

N'aw... Please let there be another instalment of this. Teenage Pitch is hilarious and I love the new and improved Jack...

I love this twist on the original storyline. It was hilarious to see Jack act as a mother toward everyone. It looks like both Bunny and Pitch got put in their place. I also like the integration of Jack as a mother in her memories as well. Great work.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

I love pitches reaction to jacks scolding! So funny

Pitch is trouble now! The full name is never a good sign.

please update

That was absolutely beautiful! I really like the idea of Jack being Pitch's mother now.

i like this story i wish it was longer

This story is awesome so I shall go check out your sequel!

Yay! Momma bear is in a good mood!

lovelyness. lol,
Frosty away! lol
Shenanigans, lol
Cant do chapter stories... you poor restricted writer
LLLOOOOLLLL!
Hi S, cant wait for the drabble series, seriously, good luck, and don't worry, you don't have to be able to write chapter stories to be a great author, (which you are) Had a great time at ur house today. Can't wait for our sleepover on Tuesday, cya then! From R

Hey Shaunz. ur fanfic looks even better when its posted up. so, we are technically authors now. lol. (do you think I should type up my big 4 fanfic? tell me tomorrow at school, Xp)

Super great loved how u made pitch the child instead of the parent and how u made jack his mother great twist hope u write another story

cool story