Wow, this is badly written.

Was Harry really going to rape Draco, and he's just going to forgive him and forget this ever happened.

I spent the weekend reading this story. It was that captivating. I hope that you will come back to it.

it's getting intense again. hopefully someone realizes soon that jasper miles got away. hopefully severus and harry pull through. can't wait to read more!

Ug. This is horribly written. You must be very lazy.

Lucius survives badly injured and is nursed back to health by narcissa.

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I want to like this story. I love the Ron/Severus pairing because it's so unique, but I can't continue to read it. Word of advice, please go back through your story and add warnings for rape. Harry raped Draco. Period. The bullshit about breaking the spell, no, he's an abusive person who wanted to dominate Draco. Not even a few chapters prior he threatened to rape Draco in a rage...

Anyway, please go back and edit your first chapter to note a warning about rape. It's blindsiding and can really upset people who aren't expecting it. Thanks and good luck with the rest of your story.

This chapter was really hard to follow. It felt rushed and jumpy.. If that makes sense?
But I really enjoy this story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

let him live it's clear he loves his family

S. Ravenclaw

Okayyyy.. A triad..? Really? *looks up excitedly*

really good.
thanks for writing

This is good!

Interesting can't wait for more

I like this chapter. It is a good chapter. Please update soon.