Although I do like the story it irks me when she thinks she suffers olr when it's said she suffers because it doesn't happen. She gets everything excpet her freedom to leave the tower and see paarthanux at the time she wishes(and even that can be fixed with a mere drawing). It's just... when I think of suffering I think of starvation or torture.
Non the less I do like it, and will continue to see where the story leads

Lol I'm secretly hoping for something smutty to happen between Brett, Alduin and Ohdahviing . Hehehehe.

Plz update this is awsome but can the ending be that the Dragonborn actually dies?

It's the first time ever I've posted a review on a fic and I've been reading them for 6 years. I've re-read multiple times your story and I can't tell you how much I love it! Every few months I come back to check if there's a new chapter! I understand that sometimes fanfics are abandoned and I just hope the book and the wedding went well! Have a nice day :)

First language is kind of a debatable point. One could argue that instinctively knowing dovahzol would make it a first language.

Hi are you still working on this fic? I love it and I hope you are, but the update dates always confuse me so I can’t tell if it’s old or not. :( Anyways I am excited for the next chapter!

I almost forgot how much I fucking love this fic. I'm kinda sad it's ended here because of how invested I am in it.

i guess the story is abondanded due to it was last updated almost if not exactly 2 years ago so i guess i might as well stop following this story :(

jeeze talking about a bad way of earning trust XD i hope brett escape rather sooner than later lol.. (who knows maybe she will take some of the clothing she got and make a rope to escape to a pathway that can allow her to run away XD). other than that i believe you have a great ending on this and rather funny way too but tobad alduin is a totle punk all the way through sadly :( i wouldnt mind seeing him be nicer to brett soon and without the talk of her death coming soon to make sure she listen because if that was me (even though i not a girl) if i was told i was gonna die than i would easily say bring it XD

Can you please update more?! I really want to know how they will know they're in love.

You have abandoned us on the story. Alduin would not be pleased at all with this

Breton dragonborn FTW

This is well written, nice

Perhaps Alduin would decide to keep her even after he destroy the world (just a suggestion)

my friend please do not abandon this amazing story! it's the best Alduin x Dragonborn story on the web! I hope that you decide to continue this story soon so I can immerse myself further in this wondrous tale.