| Reviews for Pheonix of His Heart |
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Artemis326 chapter 18 . 4/20 Hi! I love this story so far! I think it really makes the story more interesting and cool how you made Lina into a Lorelie (however you spell it ). If Lina were an amimagus I feel like she would be like a silver fox or a polar bear. I can’t wait to read more! |
Raven that flies at night chapter 18 . 5/13/2018 And so the process begins. I am excited for the be t chapter. |
Guest chapter 18 . 5/12/2018 This is a very interesting story. I can’t wait to find out what happens with the letter, her brother, and the marauders! I hope the writers blocks leaves you! Post soon! |
remy chapter 17 . 11/26/2017 love love love the story. |
ellidraco1014 chapter 1 . 10/14/2017 You don't spell thanks with a X |
Raven that flies at night chapter 17 . 10/12/2017 Oh I just love this story. I hope all goes well. |
Raven that flies at night chapter 15 . 6/11/2017 I love this story. It is very entertaing and I love how you write your story. |
crepusculumAmor chapter 6 . 10/12/2016 I am really enjoying your story and the development of characters and relationships. Though i think it would be helpful if you re read everything more before you posted as there's quite a few bits which don't read quite right or are spelled wrong. Good job though I'm looking forward to the next chapter |
Guest chapter 13 . 5/9/2016 SO amazing! Absolutely love this story PLEASE. KEEP. WRITING! Highly anticipating the next chapter! |
anonymous chapter 9 . 9/15/2015 Great story,great writing and awful ending of 9th chapter,I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! |
sheldor221B chapter 7 . 6/27/2015 How long do u want US TO WAIT WOMAN! Chop Chop! Get on with the next chap! |
sheldor221B chapter 7 . 6/22/2015 Three words:NEXT CHAPTER NOW! |
ForeverTeamEdward13 chapter 7 . 6/23/2015 Good story! Please update again soon! |
Ibelieveinbooks chapter 6 . 6/18/2015 Such a great story! I love how serelina is so cheerful around the people she knows. Can't wait for the next update |
Rose13296 chapter 5 . 6/13/2015 I enjoyed this chapter once again, although there were some spelling and grammar mistakes but they can be forgiven :) This chapter sets up the close relationship that James and Lina have and it also hints at her relationship with other characters that will happen as the story progresses. I read this chapter as soon as I could and I enjoyed it, it was maybe just a filler chapter but filler chapters are needed within a story. Keep up the good writing and I can't wait to read more :) |