Eine schöne Geschichte. Es ist wirklich schade, daß Du sie abgebrochen hast und scheinbar nicht mehr weiterschreiben willst. Warum denkst du nicht einmal an die traurigen Leser?

A beautiful story. It's really a pity that you broke it off and do not seem to want to spread it. Why do not you even think of the sad readers?

Andromeda

Translated from German by Google

I like where the story is going however, I feel like there is some missing words and the story could do a lot better if there was some really through details, such as, why Anthro is trying to "re-jog" Hiccups memory.

Oh this is interesting. I wish u would update again.

Hey I really like your story it's just a little hard to tell when a new paragraph starts but other than that it's awesome so please continue.

I like this story please try to update soon （）

Thank you,oh so much...Guest,I've always wanted to be called a wanker,can you tell me what it means 1st,and I did warn you FYI

this is excactly why you should go to hell. Usless wank you are. Fuck off

Hmmm interesting :3 could u maybe space out the next chapter for us readers? It's a little hard to read when it's all together, just a little friendly advice :3 , I wonder what will happen next?

This could be a good story, but you SERIOUSLY need to work on your writing structure.

A new paragraph stars whenever someone new speaks. Finish one point before moving onto another one. Don't end sentences with prepositions.

I suggest you find someone to look over your work to get it up to standard if you really want to be taken seriously.