Reviews for Child of Nothing |
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![]() ![]() Great job telling Wiess' opinion about the Derek/Drake arguement. She really makes me want to kill her if I was there |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah I get it. drake made a fucking horrible idea, like hell she'll tell him |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZBALLS. Nuff said about your stories |
![]() ![]() AW COME ON! It was really starting to get good agian. |
![]() ![]() I love this series, do you think you could start it back up along with JWLS? |
![]() ![]() That's mildly disappointing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() you should have known this would happen. you concluded COG for the same reason. this time, take a while, and chill |
![]() ![]() ![]() If you aren't enjoying yourself, fair enough. If you feel like I did, (about my story) then don't end it abruptly like I did.. But I'm just no good as a writer, so you would know to not do that. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, if you're worried by the fact that you unintentionally made C.o.N a sequel, don't let it stress you out; I suggest making this series a three part story, so you can try and keep the endgame ideas from landng in this fic, and have the planned material flowing into the story instead. I do have a couple of ideas of my own, if you're interested in using them. |
![]() ![]() tell me why drake agreed to break the law! |
![]() ![]() Ok I'll wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, take as much time as you need. I'm sure the other writers that read this can see where you're coming from. Take a load off, brother. I bet it's hard to make a sequal to a pretty big story (like I would know, lol) and still manage, like, five other stories. Enjoy your hiatus is all I'm trying to say. Have a good Hiatus! Nathan |
![]() ![]() Damn it epicman, piss off already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was seriously a great chapter. You kept the fighting smooth and interesting. I love it, and I love the story so far. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() It's official. You have a "quickly" fetish. I understand that you deem it necessary to try and describe how fast a character accomplishes a task, but using quickly thirty times a chapter kinda gets a tad boring. Try and substitute quickly with other things so it isn't popping up every other sentence. I like your story; I even wrote a poem about this series on the last chapter of COG. I am a deranged child. 14 year olds FTW! |