i like you're writing style a helluva a lot. and i like your jam, basically. Like she short, packed sentences and stuff. It really jabs you in the heart, right? It's a great story. cool. hope you keep writing whenever ya feel like it.

Its so beautiful...*Cries.*

Aye Sir!

Wow. Just... wow. I really don't know what to say. This was a wonderful story, written in a wonderful style, about a wonderful theme. Just... wonderful!

Sora

Oh, that was nice. I already read a few twin paradox theory stories (and even though it's kind of a crack theory, I love it) and I'd say that this story joins them quite well. Sting's death as a trigger to remeber was well done and this 'heaven' reminded me of a place which is similar to the golden plains F!Lucy returned to. It's nice that you included Rogue aswell even though it was focusing on Sting.
Anway, it's well written and I truly enjoyed your story
(sorry, not a really long nor helpful review, but nah, I do like this fic)
Good work, keep it up :3

ERMAHGERDS! I saw the genre and then nearly died (because really, I never read tragedy fics) and then I trudged on like the FT trooper that I am.

WOW. I sure didn't expect that! I like how this was somewhat *insert italics* easier on my heart - THANK YOU FOR STING'S HUMOUR! I think I would have face-desked in depression if not for that. *Le feels* And the future kiddy *sniffles*, oh that was so sweet. *Blows nose*

I initially thought that he just saw the future and all but then I read on and was like, whatialksdgjg[ora? Gears be working in my head.

I LOVED HOW YOU ENDED IT. Now I can insert my own sparkly, daisies and happy imaginations onto the ending. Huhuhu!

Anyhows, a good job! X3 (YOUR END A/N *blushblush*)