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Darkling Glow chapter 1 . 10/22/2017 I will have you know that the mental image of Connor juggling lawnmowers nearly caused me to drown in my lemonade. And after I'd finally recovered, Roy's attempt at smiling just about finished me off. :P Anyway, this is without a doubt one of my favorite YJ stories so far. It's very well written and does a great job of including all the little details that Robin's impromptu "mission" would have required (most of which I never even thought about before reading this), and you were really good at balancing all the characters involved as well as their individual personality quirks. Great job! :) |
Mischief Tea chapter 1 . 8/6/2017 It was so fun to see the process leading up to the events of the episode and all of the rationale behind different parts of their act. The hearts! Haha I actually had to go look it up because I didn't remember precisely what the costumes looked like. And Roy cracks me up with his "very suspish" background glares. (Also Artemis getting stage fright? Awwwwww :) well done getting back on mission, though.) This was a blast! Thanks for sharing! |
TimeturnerJasmy chapter 1 . 9/25/2016 Thank you so much for writing this. It was amazing. |
Pixie07 chapter 1 . 6/4/2016 This was fantastic and it's the first time I read a story before the performance excellent idea and story |
cantorahagedoorn chapter 1 . 5/24/2016 Wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading this. Also nice of you to include this ending! Keep up the good work! |
SonderQuill chapter 1 . 5/3/2016 THIS WAS SO GOOD! Man, I would've never expected anyone to be able to write a prequel to Performance at ALL; let alone it be this awesome! Seriously, Velkyn Karma, YOU should be writing the show! That was absolutely amazing... Wow... boy, I wish I could write like you. How do you DO it?! (That isn't necessarily a rhetorical question if you honestly don't mind taking the time to answer) But really, thank you SO much for writing this. Seriously. Thank you. |
Bookworm85 chapter 1 . 3/1/2016 Love it! It was an awesome addition 'Performance.' I laughed at Robin trying to get Roy to smile, and then deciding Roy shouldn't smile after all. Your attention to detail was good- having excuses for Bruce, Kaldur, and Wally being gone; showing that the training took multiple days; Robin having to encourage, calm nerves, and refocus the rest of the team. I liked the ending, with the conversation between Jack and Dick. Nice work! |
Biancachu chapter 1 . 2/23/2016 This was awesome! It was lots of fun all around. The characterizations were good, the writing was great, and I loved it. |
Nightmare in between chapter 1 . 11/8/2015 Fantasticly humourous little oneshot, I thoroughly enjoyed this. |
Fairy-x-Heart chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 This was such an awesome story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading every part. Thank you for sharing! :-) |
Darkmiror chapter 1 . 8/4/2015 This is fantastic! I love how in depth you went with their training and preparing for this role:) This was a very well thought out and written piece. Great job! Your writing was wonderful and the characters were not OOC! What else can I say:) |
CuzI'mBatman chapter 1 . 8/3/2015 Nice story -) |
Pyrinsomniac chapter 1 . 5/28/2015 THIS IS AMAZING! Trollmaster ringleader Robin, the scowly bickering archers, sweet M'gann, smashy snarly Connor, and a genuine sibling and teammate dynamic- including mention of the absent teammates and a solid reason for excluding them. You have a firm grasp on Robin- not easy- and telling this from his perspective adds simultaneous flair and depth to an already interesting scenario. Ending with Dick's laughter and interaction with Haly was also absolutely perfect. Your characterization is impeccable, your pacing is good, the dialogue is excellent, and the layout makes everything flow smoothly. You integrate action and Dick's internal processes seamlessly. You write my darlings beautifully, and thank you so much for sharing them this way. |
TheImaginativeFox chapter 1 . 5/11/2015 What a cool idea! I loved how Robin coached them all through it, and then the after part with Jack was great :) |
I am a Detective chapter 1 . 4/5/2015 Pretty funny and nice take on this episode. |