| Reviews for Forbidden Fruit |
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  Clo chapter 8 . 4/15 Loved it, feels way too unfinished though. |
 LuvinAniManga chapter 8 . 3/2 Thank you for finishing! At least there was some hope there at the end. Gotta love Jareth - so confident, and always planning five steps ahead. |
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 8 . 3/1 Nice job! I like the idea that you have that, in Fae years, Jareth isn't much older than Sarah. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/11/2019 I am shaking my seat, I can’t wait for the next chapter! |
| ArinnaMyrene chapter 7 . 8/15/2019 Oohh! Excellent idea! Please continue! |
| LuvinAniManga chapter 7 . 8/2/2019 Definitely had to re-read the whole story, but I'm glad you updated! I'm looking forward to the conclusion and a happy ending! |
| SKY UNICORN chapter 7 . 7/15/2019 Oh gosh yayay thank you so much for a new chapter! so hope there is a happy ending! Thank you again! |
| FelineNinjaGrace chapter 7 . 7/13/2019 Ha! Only if Jareth appologizes. Otherwise, he can stay unhappy for all I care. The jerk. |
| FelineNinjaGrace chapter 6 . 7/13/2019 Ha! She "wished him away". What rubbish. And she didn't "wish him away" to JARETH at any rate. She "wished him away" to good parents who would have been able to provide for him in a way that 16 years old Sarah couldn't have. So, logistically speaking, Jareth broke about a bazillion rules in taking away a baby that wasn't wished away to him at any rate. ;) |
| FelineNinjaGrace chapter 5 . 7/13/2019 Ummm, seriously? She still "harbors feelings for that man"? Ok, put her back into the insane asylum and give her a couple of smacks to try and put her brain back in place. The guy forced her to run 13 hours for her brother (actually ten, the cheating B-word), then raped her, then abandoned her for 9 months while she had to go through horrible lonliness and fear of the future as a pregnant 16 year old and then to steal away her child, and then to let her be put into an insane assylyum for 2 WHOLE YEARS!? So, was that a typo that I read right there? Or did she still want to be with him? Cause the whole time Jareth was talking to his mother about how she threw his love away and crap, I was thinking "Dang straight she threw your love away! Who would want a love like that where someone sends cleaners after you and poisons your peach and then rapes you? Your love is worth sh**!" And then when he thought, "She will always be the mother of my son, but I will never take her as my queen." I thought to myself "Halleluigh! You dodged a bullet with that one Sarah. If I was Sarah and he had said that to me, I would have sneered in his face and said, "Good. I would never have accepted anyways." Then I would find another fae Underground, (OR human, since there are tons of wished away babies, I imagine) and shown Jareth that he's not all that hot after all. Damn him. |
| lykiana chapter 7 . 7/6/2019 Yay for a new chapter! I sure hope those two will get their happy ending soon. rosacumberbatch: Try reading it on the website, that worked for me. Chapter 2 wouldn't load for me in the app either. |
| rosacumberbatch chapter 1 . 7/5/2019 the second chapter isn't loading |
| Resisting-Moonlight chapter 7 . 7/5/2019 Reread this story. Very interesting. Hoping they can be together as a family. Sarah's not happy in the normal world. She's meant to be with her friends. |
| Jetredgirl chapter 7 . 7/5/2019 Woo! Very excited you've decided to continue. |
| MamaDrama chapter 6 . 3/10/2019 And now my heart is broken right along with both of theirs. It's bittersweet and I love it |
