Wonderful story, sorry for not reviewing earlier. Just could not stop reading as I had to find out what happened next. Glad to see both Lisa and Gwen dead. So nice that Susan has got Alice back into the fold.

Thankyou. DottyWho. 07.10.2014.

Brilliant and Lovely! Thanks for sharing!

Thanks so much for writing this. It was brilliant.

Lovely, lovely, lovely! Thank you for sharing it.

oh my gods this was beautiful i laughed, i cried (a lot), and i got a bubbly feeling in the pit of my stomach. this had a beautiful storyline and was wonderfully written. it should have been at least one episode of cannon, if it were up to me an entire season! thanks for all the effort you put into this. WELL DONE!

Loved it. Maybe as a little one-shot you could tell us the story of registering Carwyn as a Harkness-Jones. :-)

C'était une histoire fabuleuse.
J'ai adoré!

This was a fabulous story.
I loved it!

That was wonderful. Very happy family party with them all, including Alice. Looking forward to the next new story. You have a great story telling ability. Thank you for sharing.

Ah, a happy ending. Hooray!

So how did Lisa know that Jack was Susan's dad? Doesn't sound like a lot of people know. And Jack needs to fix it with Ianto about hurting his feelings. That was so sad that Ianto said he didn't care if Jack hurt his feelings as long as they are now together. I care. Needs to be fixed! Susan being his daughter give Ianto one more thing to be insecure about.

A harsh but necessary ending to Lisa, and I liked it because it was spectacularly written.

Love it! Is it going to continue, or are you letting it end here?

WOW, you are brilliant, Lisa punishment was so original plus slow and painful and no one more deserved then her. Jack expressing his feeling about Lisa made me reconsider the sympathy I had for Gwen death . Bravo Magnificent chapter

Sweet! Gwen dead! Lisa dead! Can't get any better than that.