Reviews for The Seven Deadly Sins
candlefox chapter 2 . 8/21/2016
Omg :') this is beautiful...sadly I see in the comments that there's 2 sins left :( I'll try to enjoy the most the following chaps
0anhonestpuck0 chapter 5 . 7/13/2016
It's been so long, but I so wish you'd continue this. You express the character so well. Only two sins left!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/1/2016
You haven't finished! Please! My heart.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/1/2016
This. This here. This is the perfect explanation for their dynamic. It's perfect. And it's like a Polaroid snapshot of pure angst and awesome. You are the best.
adacupcake chapter 5 . 10/18/2014
this is really good! I hope you update soon :)
Hawkstang chapter 5 . 4/30/2014
Great work I can't wait for next update ;)
I'm just a person now read 66 chapter 5 . 4/23/2014
CUTEEEE Update, update, update, update. I've read this since between February, March, or January, and I've been unconsciously waiting ever since!
MissiB chapter 5 . 4/23/2014
Oh I love it! I love the relationship that's portrayed here, and you're TOTALLY right on the Greed front, it's obvious that Mustang will blatantly REFUSE to be parted from his Hawkeye!
I look forward to the next chapter! Is it bad that I'm really looking forward to the Lust one?...eh, I don't care XD
Controller of the Tardis chapter 5 . 4/23/2014
Hi. I finally got a proper account. This is dotdodot.

Awwwww, that was cute. I really liked that chapter... You took your time updating... But you updated and that's all that matters!

UPDATE SOON!
BorealisBlazing chapter 2 . 4/1/2014
Looooove it! I don't know how you fit so much feeling into your one-shots but you've got this story down to the nines! Your detail is just enough to set the scene, but you don't drag it out- there is something crisp and refreshing about your writing that reminds me of hearing a grandfather clock's pendulum swing back and forth; hypnotizing in it's tranquil beat. I felt in a poetic mood, carry on with the stories!
BorealisBlazing chapter 1 . 4/1/2014
Amazing- you caught the character spot on- a perfect 10 out of 10 for this one and you've got me grinning ear to ear with delight. I love the line:

"The Colonel turned away angrily, as a lance of jealously pierced him. He felt its contagion seep and spread outward, effusing his body with a possessive bitterness that left him feeling helpless and resentful."

Fantastic! I can't wait for more. :)
BorealisBlazing chapter 4 . 4/1/2014
I love them! I love them! Beautiful style, beautiful voice, fantastic talent. I can only ask that you continue them!
SailingTheOTP chapter 4 . 3/3/2014
Buddy... You gonna update? Please do... I love this...
RebellaGrayson chapter 4 . 2/21/2014
cant wait for lust that should be interesting
Dotdodot chapter 4 . 2/17/2014
Awwwww, your welcome! I love this fic, it's beyond awesome!

You and I are the same my friend, the exact same: ALL OF SPACE AND TIME!

I'm sorry that I am never very descriptive when I review but I am a person of few words.

Anyway, awesome chapter, no mistakes!

please update soon!
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