I was like “it’s Fon isn’t it...YES IT WAS IM SO JEALOUS” I didn’t expect it but the description was spot on I love it and I’m only on the second one

Is this story dead?

Pretty sure I’ve read this before but I still loved reading it either way, the references of len having some sort of connection with the vindice and Bermuda always make me way too interested XD. Perhaps 2020 will be the year, perhaps not; either way, this was a great story!

What a horrible younger brother, hope he gets sent to juvenile prison and his parents get charged with something an go to prison as well.

I suggest getting a beta or at least running this through a spell checker. The grammar and spelling isn't the best, but I do like the plot.

But, the ship with hibari and tsuna? I like if he has something with the others because I love the multi ship especially when is harem

I feel like if the author starts writing this again they should rewrite the whole thing and get rid of this whole three way relationship because there’s no way Hibari would share the person there dating

I'm confused. Isn't he dating Kyoya? Then shouldn't he NOT be... /Doing/ things to and ogling Tsuna? Especially since neither Kyoya and Tsuna know. Doesn't it count as cheating?

It took me the 26 chapter to understand that tsuna Len and kyoya are dating lololol my brain suck

I absolutely love your fanfic, I ship it so much
There should be more like this one damit

;-;

:3

I still don't understand who does he likes? Tsuna or kyoya?
My head is spinning ;

The title is it a reference of no game no life lolol I thought of that when I read it

Wait really? I was four when I was in preschool but even then there were kids younger than me

Great story, I saw pinyin so I assume that this OC has something to do with Fon?
Also, the parents seem like the Typical (stereotypical?) Asians that blame you for things that are actually beyond your control. Good thing the ones who move West tend to stray from that kind of thinking.

Meanwhile nobody mentions how much of a fucking little *** that other brother is for murdering. I hope there's a part of the story where he dies in a terrible way for his terrible act. Karma should come for him.

Pettiness aside, this story has potential. I can relate pretty heavily to the bitterness of the narrator, even if we don't have the same life situations. So, I appreciate a more dark perspective than all those happy-go-lucky or Mary-Sue (I forgot the male version) fanfics. :-)

Propaganda? Isn't the Cloud Attribute called Propagation?

Also, Cloud Flames are Purple. Not Indigo. Indigo's for Mist Flames.

A really good KHR insert is 'I didn't write my life so I'm screwed'. I warn you: it is dark. There are major canon changes. But it is SO worth it in the end.