This chapter seemed like it was going by just a bit fast. As if u were hurried.

Ahhh, not my favorite chapter, but it was still pretty good. Tied in with the anime pretty well.

:D

Well it seems that is the end od ur chapters, i do hope you continue this. I liked this fic, not many G-Gundam fics r complete... ;u;

Was a good read.

Waaahhhh?

What are you talking about? That was a really good chaptee, i almost felt bad for the guy. Okay, so i id feel bad...! But that was written really well. The raw emotion...! The descriptive scenes...! I saw it all in my head x3 it was great...! :B

Onto the next chappie...!

Wow first G-Gundam fic?

You should do alot more, well idk, maybe u have. And her i thought you were going to be a new-bie in writing. Nope, you did REALLY good. I had just read a pretty poorly written G-Gundam fic, but this is really good...!

I like it so far.

I felt a tug at me lil heart strings :)

Cant wait to read more...!

Actually, I think that this wrapped things up quite nicely. (And obviously, other people agreed, because 80-plus reviews for three chapters is absolutely astounding!

Keep up the great work if you're still writing!

Cheers,

-Manna

This was good, but not as good as the first part. Though I don't think that much needed to be said or thought on Domon's part. I do think you captured his simplicity well. He is not a complex character, but he is very interesting in his own right.

Great work!

Cheers,

-Manna

First of all, this was good. Don't be down about yourself. That episode was a wonderful one! And you know, for just a moment there, Schwarz almost seemed interested in Rain. (Too bad he had to just...go and die like that! I would have shipped them, haha.) At that point in the show, when Domon pushed her to the ground like that... I don't know how I felt. The first time I saw it, I think I was angry with him. Angry, because he was being so irrational; he was only thinking about himself. Sure, he was upset because Allenby was gone, but even Allenby wouldn't want Domon to physically hurt Rain because of it. (I'm sure the younger girl would honestly disapprove of that action.)

Even Argo seemed appalled! And I've gotta say, I was too. I rewatched that episode the other day, and I didn't feel quite the same way. I think I felt more sad. Perhaps it's because I'm not as young as I was the first time I saw it- there's a 5 year gap there- but I really, truly felt...anguish. I think that Rain's feelings in this 'fic reflect pretty much what I assumed she was feeling in that episode. It's hard to love someone so completely, only to be pushed away at every turn. And I know it has to hurt Rain, too. It's obvious, at least to me, that what he says to and about her affects her; when he snaps at her, it hurts, it really does.

Sorry, I've babbled too much. But really, I wanted to say that I think you did a wonderful job here. I never really thought about what she did after she found Schwarz (I just assumed she stayed the night either with him, or in the hangar), so this was a great idea.

Cheers,

-Manna

Another fine chapter. This was one of my favorite episodes.

Brilliant...to me simply brillant! Why I didn't come across this before is a mystery but better later than never. I wasn't going to review till I read your whole fic but after reading this I just had to. I wish that this could have been an episode in the series. You filled in the parts where we saw Domon and Rain just thinking as they got rained down on so wonderfully. Great, great work with their emotions. Thank you!

wow, that was so good! *sigh* you did a very good job! if you havent already, i strongly strongly suggest you write a full G Gundam fic!

wow, this is so good, youre relaying his feelings and emotions very well, because at this point his heart is in turmoil, a mixture of strange emotions that hes never experienced before, or jus didnt want to acknowledge...

i would hav to agree with you on that note...to hav the one person who meant more to you than life itself, tell you to leave...it must hav literally ripped her heart apart...i cant even begin to understand, let alone describe...but you did a very good job!

what do you mean, "it sucked," it was noce, and i liked think im lying either, cuz i usually speak my mind. I liked it a lot, you should really follow through with it

Well written, a wonderful read : ) Keep it up!

Stink!Dude that doesn't stink,it of was great keep writing dude.

How dare you say that story stunk. It rocked I

don't think I have read a better love story on this website for G gundum.

well later p.s. I am only 11