Delightful story.

Gibbs should not have had Tony leave Kaitlin for that long after what she’d just been through. It was cruel and unnecessary.

Excellent story telling...I loved this story. Great spins. Thanks for sharing.

Ya know. I didn't see Ziva's bein OOC at all. In fact, I though the show went way too soft on her.
She's an adult and to continue blaming her father and brother on her current and continuing behavior was very distasteful to me.
She kept going from "poor me" to "out of control angry witch" - whichever one served her purposes.

Wish the team had let her self-destruct!

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Sigh. What a lovely ending to this chapter in their lives.
I'm really glad I started reading this Universe.

As the saying goes; Ya done good, Fred.

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Nice Wrap up of Jet Lag. You did a much better job than canon.

Wow. One year already. I'm not ready for her to move from babyhood to toddler. Waaaa.

BF.

Aww. Poor Tony. Having his back turned when Kaitlin took her 1st steps. I'll bet though it happens far too often out here in the real world so I'm glad you kept it real.

Bad Gibbs! He should have sent Tim since the only reason Jet Gag was even written was to put Tony & Ziva together and they ended up looking like incompetent idiots.
Poor Kaitlin too for suffering separation anxiety.

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Your story. Your call. I can live with it. Tony's ability to forgive [to an extent] probably makes him healthier in his heart and soul than me.

Cheerios. My now grown up and a mom of her own nearly 4 year old loved dry Cheerios as a snack when she was little. Thanks for the nostalgia.

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Amy and Karl need to meet Tony So they can be thanked by him. They saved her life, after all.

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I knew it couldn't be that easy. I love Amy and Karl!
I'd say more but I've got to keep reading

BF

Holy cow! It's a good thing I don't have to be up early because I've got to find out what happens.

Regressing - love the 'gwins scene.

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Rather shocked that Tony had Kaitlin in daycare after an attempted kidnapping even if his SOB paternal sperm donor was in custody. I don't think I could let my child out of my sight.

Hope Fornell charges Senior with attempted kidnapping even if he cooperates in bringing down the baby broker ring.

I'll always love RJ but I was disappointed they softened Senior. It made Tony look like a liar.

Kudos for writing him this way.

I like Gibbs being protective of Tony regarding Senior despite the fact Gibbs would have only been 12-13 when Tony was conceived. :)

Thanks for making Senior the horrible man Tony described before RJ was cast.

BF

Thank you for putting Abby in the "not mommy" column. You relieved My of a niggle I had that Tony and "Auntie Abby" were going to end up together.

Is Tony still hung up on Amanda or does he just want her around for Kaitlin?

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I just realized something. Abby's energy (from an over abundance of CAF-POW) it's me needing a nap after all of her "scenes".

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