Interesting

Hm, I feel like Shiro is better name than just Hitchigo because not only does it makes him unique as a character but also would be insulted by that name just being the King’s with an H added. I also feel Zangetsu should learn bone rush but instead use it in a sword like fashion to make it unique.

You should have put Misty's reaction the the Caterpie.

Awesome fic

Awesome update :)

Interesting story. I hope you continue with the series and I see great potential in this story.

Personally my favorite female companion is iris. I like dragon types and how she interacts with Pokemon. The decks I use either are water and physic 'Physic Storm' or a mix of everything 'Junk Drawer' it would be funny to see how hichigo reacts to Iris and her dragon Pokemon.

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

Have ichigo and hichigo wear the outife ichigo is wearing in the opening credits of the first few episodes of bleach that has the skull image on it but make it so its polar oppisate colors for each of them (example: ichigo: black shirt with white skull... hichigo: white shirt black skull

I like the start of this story can't wate to see what happens next.

I really enjoyed this chapter and I hope you update soon

I really hope you keep up with this story. Its great for the first chapter. I seriously like the idea of ichigo and his hollow being twins who use twin Riolu. I can just imagine how epic their double teaming or double battles would be XD

Not to bad so far I would have at lest have Brock travel with them if I were you

good start

ya gotta be F***ING KIDDING ME